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SquiddlePrincess — TAOSAE: Chapter Four, Page 13

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Description Jamie explains what happened last Saturday when he bought Sherilyn's present. Well, he starts to explain.
Astrid a go-go!
Sherilyn is peeved about being interrupted - despite having already derailed the topic herself.
I decided to fade the flashback to make it clear when Jamie is talking in the present and when he's talking in the past.
Also, this confused my sister, so I'll explain. When Jamie says Astrid, he doesn't mean it was her. He's noticed her arriving. When he says 'Oh, no!', it's not 'Oh no! Astrid's here!'. He's explaining to Emma. Astrid wasn't there THEN: she's here NOW.
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