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Published: 2008-02-18 06:18:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description      You are always there,
     Yet you never are.
     Pulsing, Flowing, Pounding,
     Sneaking into precious absence
     And unsteady focus.
     
     You're right where I not want you to be...
     
     Whenever I wander,
     I find myself lost,
     in an evergrowing storm
     that shakes another piece of
     my sanity.

     I'm never where I used to be...

     You are the utter essence of "the living dead",
     I'll just choke on sight.
     Wondering why neither
     Gave a slight step towards
     the awaiting unknown.

     Are neither of us where we should be?

     Are we the looked in on an inside joke?
     A rubix cube of emotions,
     controlled by them.
     Who are they, angel?
     Why do they care so much to destroy, dear monster?
     What can you do..when.."what" you do, really isn't
     you?

     We're right where they want us to be.
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Comments: 13

booklvr [2008-02-21 23:25:35 +0000 UTC]

this is reaaaaaalllllllllllly, really good. you know, my art teacher asked me what inspires me to write sometimes.....i think it might be jealousy....

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Kira-15 [2008-02-20 00:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Are we the looked in on an inside joke?
A rubix cube of emotions,
controlled by them.
Who are they, angel?
Why do they care so much to destroy, dear monster?
What can you do..when.."what" you do, really isn't
you?

This is my favorite part ^^

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StainsofHope In reply to Kira-15 [2008-02-20 05:26:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ur the second person to say that. ^.^ i appreciate the fave too.

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FaithBringsDeath [2008-02-19 01:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Just wrote for the sake of writing or writing for the sake of telling person it's about of your feelings without actually telling them?

Wow that's a long ass statement...

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StainsofHope In reply to FaithBringsDeath [2008-02-19 02:44:21 +0000 UTC]

lol. took me a minute to realize what you said.

i wrote for the sake of writing but whenever i write it seems to take on a mind of its own. anmost of my mind is focused on recent emotional poisons.

there.

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FaithBringsDeath In reply to StainsofHope [2008-02-20 01:03:09 +0000 UTC]

"Emotional Poison"

I like that. I really like that. Almost as much as "Failurific Fantastica."

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StainsofHope In reply to FaithBringsDeath [2008-02-20 05:19:21 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks. wow "failurific fantastica" thats a pretty amoozing line. ^.^

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FaithBringsDeath In reply to StainsofHope [2008-02-21 01:06:22 +0000 UTC]

XD

I actually thought of it during that volley ball game the other day xD"

No one really cared enough, on any court. It was a celebration of Failurific Fantastica!!!

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StoicPro1 [2008-02-18 23:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Whenever I wander,
I find myself lost,
in an evergrowing storm
that shakes another piece of
my sanity.

i find myself lost sometimes in my problems this would be a detrimental way to describe it.
well written.

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StainsofHope In reply to StoicPro1 [2008-02-19 02:40:23 +0000 UTC]

aww yeah thanks. it just kind of came naturally. i didnt really think about that little section till now.

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Bang-The-Doldrums [2008-02-18 12:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Are we the looked in on an inside joke?
A rubix cube of emotions,
controlled by them.
Who are they, angel?
Why do they care so much to destroy, dear monster?
What can you do..when.."what" you do, really isn't
you?

Thats My Favourite Part.
I Loved It

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StainsofHope In reply to Bang-The-Doldrums [2008-02-18 19:34:51 +0000 UTC]

ahh! thanks! aww and you faved it too

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Bang-The-Doldrums In reply to StainsofHope [2008-02-18 22:18:13 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome.
How Could I Not Fav It?

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