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Published: 2018-09-07 03:49:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 630; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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As mentioned earlier this week, here is my little psycho in aaaaalll her deranged glory! I have to say, this is my best work, yet!Related content
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You know what sucks about Twily? She's an alternate personality, so it's basically impossible to punish her for what she's done. Throw the rabbit in jail, you're just punishing Erica. And that really sucks after she was either complicit in or responsible for several murders and many more injuries. Definitely an interesting character, I just always found that unfair. And nice work.Β
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Thank you! That's one of the angles I was going with her character. You CAN'T punish Twily without punishing Erica, who needs help more than anything, especially when she was a victim/tool to a bigger plot.
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Ok so, I saw your post on Archive of Our Own and came here to comment, which I did. Then decided to scroll through your latest stuff cus I hadn't been back for awhile. Gotta tell you, my phone went flying with some choice words trailing behind it. LOVE IT!!
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Eeeeee thank you!!!
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I just had an interesting thought. If put this image at the end of ch9 "Letters to Dawn", would it not make the impact that much bigger?!
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Like in the comment section?
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No like right underneath the paragraph describing the picture at the end. I've read a couple fanfics that did that and it really adds effect. Prime example here. archiveofourown.org/works/1047β¦
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Eh, I'm not savy enough for that. Qnd there are some of my readers who are really sensitive towards harsh gore. So I rather not do that to them. Thanks for the suggestion thoughπ
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Not many things can make me admit, "Alright that's creeping me out." This is one of them and drastically different than I imagined whwn reading the scene. Bravo
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Well, it's definitely dramatized to be more scary lol but is pretty much what i was going for lol thanks!
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Oh dear...Β And I'd just managed to stop having nightmares about her, too.Β Β
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Whoops, sorry πΆ
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This is definitely Twilly in all her gory, deranged glory. Great job getting her insanity across. Are you going to be able to get back to writing your stories again? I'm looking forward to reading Amongst Uncertainty and the sequel to Embrace It. That was quite the cliffhanger you left us with. Anyway, I love your story and hope to be able to read more of it.Β Β
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I'm glad you like it!!
I'm sort of workijg on it? I have a bunch of stuff going on right now, but imma try to work on it soon.
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Hope things settle down a bit for you.Β You're a great writer.Β Β
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Aw, thank youπ
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Oh well done!! I'm gonna have to go and read the fic...again, lol.
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Certifiably creepy... *shudders* Well done on that! XD
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You're welcome! ^_^
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Woops! Meant to comment on actual piece! Sorry!
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