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jbru126 [2013-07-19 19:39:34 +0000 UTC]
Damn, I definitely like this. It's like a living Wish.
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Jakethecardsculptor [2013-07-19 17:32:47 +0000 UTC]
The balance is good. The wording is a little wonky. If you want to make it sound like a real magic card, you should word it like this:
"Whenever Merchant from Elsewhere enters the battlefield, search for any artifact or creature card from outside the game, reveal it, then put it on top of your library.
U, tap: Target opponent gains control of the permanent you chose from outside the game."
It should cut down on the wording a bit and clarify what you meant to say.
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starkzero In reply to Jakethecardsculptor [2013-07-19 18:13:46 +0000 UTC]
thanks for this better wording, it's way more clear. it is done
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Jakethecardsculptor In reply to starkzero [2013-07-20 03:38:22 +0000 UTC]
No problem. I'm a stickler for rules and flavor text.
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