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This is just another version of the last image, with more weight added to Laura's mountainous mass. I personally like how her ass is hangin' from the platform while the immense weight of her belly & breasts splays out in front of her in a cascade of flesh. Still don't like the absence of hands and feet, though.I actually had some text written for this, but it seemed redundant, much like the image. Laura wins the contest and Elise (her feeder) is hired on to continue the fattening operation. But there's got to be a better ending than that. I'm thinking of introducing a matronly old dame who has been the sponsor of the contest, and she's fully as fat as Laura but about twice her age. She's been looking for a protΓ©gΓ©, someone who can serve as a supreme manifestation of her fat-filled lifestyle. To her, Laura's off to a "good start" and can now begin her apprenticeship under a true master. Laura's too fat to fight it, and between Elise and her new "master", she's quickly on her way to higher poundage.
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I wonder if she's still growing or what they do after the contest is over. I have so many questions about this
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oh wait it says in the description. But I still have questions about her size
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I would love it if you went back to this story and either continued it or redrew it. Or hell why not both?
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I just revisited this series. Its glorious! One of the hottest picture stories I've ever encountered. Thanks!
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I like the idea so far like some of the other artwork "A few more" was one of them.Β Allowing aΒ sort of crossover.Β Even if she needs some coaxing.Β
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I wonder what would happen if the machine gave out
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Your works are always masterpieces, Studio. She makes Paige look a twig. An pseudo-idea I had, is to introduce a rival for Laura, someone who can confront her and spur her to gain even faster.
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over the last few days I have been looking at those pictures again and again. While i love the over all picture very much there is one thing that struck me as odd and not quite right right from the first look and I can't shale it.
Its her face.
It looks attached and her left cheek does not instantly "belong to" the face either in my opinion. The hair has grown very long and is framing the cheek-neck-chin-line in a way that makes it look like a seperate person on first sight.
I also was first surprised to see her sitting a lot more upright and she seems taller. In the last picture before this one she looks bent over to the front.
When I looked closer I realized she is pulled to the front by her belly and pushed from the back by her butt cheeks and back rolls. She looks more like one person there to me. I like that last pic best.
Then when comparing it to this one I realized that now that her butt was flowing over the edge of the platform but not resting on the ground she would be pulled back a bit and her back fat would have more space as well. This holds her in a more upright siting position and so she looks less sunken into her body.
So now that her head and face are above the rest of her body again her cheeks should spread more and become rounder I think and her hair should flow around the cheeks more not hang strait down.
As it is my first impression of her face was a blob like body with the arms bent at the elbows back to the top sides of the head and that all sitting on the rest of the body as a detached being. I think it would look better if her cheeks would be watermelon or even beachball sized fairly round balls for fat sitting on both sides of her face with the hair flowing either only to the back or around those fully cheeks. as it is the look like they just stick out to the side but not to the front and back of her head.
I hope I was able to communicate what I mean. Pleas do not take this the wrong way. I still love the picture but wanted to let you know where I see potential to improve. But I could be wrong with my ideas and you got it right how it would look.
Still her hair should not grow this long in just a few months. In the two close up drawings her hair was only about one head diameter away from her head while now it is hanging down 3 or 4 head diameter. So it would be from a bit past shoulder length to max, breast length on a normal sized person to butt length or more in just a couple of months. I hope thats not too much into detail.
Hopefully you see my critique as constructive and helpful as it was meant to be and not as point out weaknesses just for the sake of making you feel bad. I would never give critique of that reason.
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This picture is quite intriguing. An amazing testament to unbound gluttony and unresrained indulgence! You are the master of the hyper-obese belle, a true champion of the beyond bulbous babe! I thank you for posting these fine pictures!
I do like some of the ideas for further illustrations that Holly-Marie has proposed in her comment above. Those could be very compelling, indeed! However, I totally understand if they never come fruition as real life has a way of interfering with more important frivolities such as indulging in one's fantasy for fatness. But they would still be cool to see! Hey, it never hurts to ask...
Thanks again for these excellent pictures and story!
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hmmm - I like your idea for an ending although i wish it was not the end.
There could also be a scene where all the other contestants are compared or weighted or such.
Another great scene would be how she is loaded for transport. Making sure she does not roll of but also keeping her feed. I doubt she can go even 1 minute without food now.
All the cranes and slings, support lits and heavy duty forklift would also add a lot of activity and make the whole thing come more alive I think.
She could first be loaded on a flat bed truck then on to the airport and loaded into the cargo bay while shocked people watch and some fat girls may even watch with envy. I guess they would also need to load a mobile feeding machine and a few huge tanks of food.
Its probably also a great sight to see her roll by on her flat bed truck. It would stop all traffic with its over wide size and so cars would have to wait and watch in fascination.
Ah the possibilities. If only I had your talent and the time. Well maybe I could inspire you a bit more. Thanks any way for all the great drawings.
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