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-Old symphonic wordsPlucked fresh from the valley
Sprout from shortcomings
-Velveteen whispers
Sheathing pale skin like sunscreen
Speak slower at dusk
-Honeysuckle breeze
Wafts warmly in summer swells
Guiding nostrils home
-Your dampened tendrils
Lying lax on my shoulder
Trail down to my soul
-Plucked pink peonies
Frail from overexposure
Exhale final breaths
-At coveted dusk
Avarice stomps the sidewalk
Donning filthy mirth
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Comments: 2
thehottestshiteva [2009-06-22 18:59:36 +0000 UTC]
although im not the biggest fan of haikus in general, i like these.
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SubzeroMonarch In reply to thehottestshiteva [2009-06-24 03:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'd like to think that I've improved from my first collection, but this is the only thing I've written in months that is worthwhile poetry-wise. DX
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