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Theme 90: "Never-ending chase"Through you, to him, for me
This tragedy that came in three
A simple story where no one wins
About a love which never ends
Where I lie awake and dream of you
Where you blush before him ‘til your cheeks turn blue
Where he peers at you and thinks of me
A process that lasts eternally
A forbidden thought of you and I
Puts you in the middle, and then you cry
To the one whose eyes are locked on me
You stupid girl, you’re so naïve
I’ve been here waiting all along
Trying to tell you that you were wrong
With open arms I stood alone
You walked away and left for home
I told you that you’d have to choose
You went with him; I knew you’d lose
Because his heart was in my hand
A love you could not understand
And so you showed up at my door
A presence I could scarce ignore
But I forced myself to turn away
And settled for second-best that day
You stood rejected in the cold
Devoid of a hand to hold
Still, I was not satisfied
I’d not be happy until you cried
So I stood with him and looked at you
Where I screamed until my cheeks turned blue
Where I watched the tears stream down your face
Where I finally put you in my place
Your body was found at the crack of dawn
Hung up in the closet, but you were gone
Safe from a world where tragedies
Are always said to come in threes
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Comments: 8
thehottestshiteva [2009-02-12 21:23:10 +0000 UTC]
I am in love with this poem!!!! It is written excellently! So happy I got to perform it at contest!
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SubzeroMonarch In reply to thehottestshiteva [2009-02-13 02:33:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for doing so, dearie! Luffs you!
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Munch12 [2008-12-23 03:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is so awesome. I know it ends in tragedy but its so well written. I read it three times already and i will probably read it again. good job my friend
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SubzeroMonarch In reply to Munch12 [2008-12-24 06:10:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment. Have a lovely day, my friend.
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Munch12 In reply to SubzeroMonarch [2008-12-24 15:32:42 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure and Happy Holidays my friend
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SubzeroMonarch In reply to MirrorQuick [2008-12-21 01:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Hey, it's a big closet! It's not like it's impossible. Not that I've ever attempted it, but...O.o
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