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Published: 2017-10-11 17:52:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 577; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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(about my storyMan... I hardly knew what was going on at all when I started with Ruka's round.
Her round really made me start thinking critically about the story, and it's what spurred the major changes that have taken place since.
Shoot, back then everyone still had their Japanese names.... :'D Only about a week before Holly's round started, did her name get changed from 'Hasuaka'...
In Holly's round, the time period and setting were considered. (1980's?? America?) -- In Mamoru's, they were confirmed (1987-88, Southeast Appalachian Mountains (WV?))
Holly's round also spurred this phrase.... "Get real!" Thanks, Fiala. XD And I began the changes needed to make it a more realistic and believable (despite the magic and super-powers
Mamoru's round really dug me deep into the plot and opened my mind up to the future of the story. I've always known he was one of my most tragic characters, the round didn't teach me that.
Ash ended up being the most personal character to me, which I was kind of surprised about. But then, I found out that he's relatable to a lot of people.
For Yasmin, it's personal.... because I gave up her spot to Pushkari for the next round.
since we didn't share this info in the profile tasks yet in their rounds, here's a little extra info on Ruka & Holly
Ruka, sum-up words: Imaginative, Capricious, Playful
Themes: "I Believe In Angels" - ABBA -AND- "Anything I'm Not" - Lenka
Holly, sum-up words: Repressive, Reluctant, Reserved
Theme: "Black" - Sarah McLachlan
she's also not homeless anymore; she lives with a very sweet old couple (her foster parents).
Characters / Flowers of Enchantment (c) Zakuro-Kona
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Comments: 7
SpaceCastaway [2017-10-21 20:52:31 +0000 UTC]
It's so great OCT helped you develop your story this much! Feel you so much on that. I wrote a similar thing for myself to summarize how far OCT impacted not only my story, but also my life. (Maybe will publish it one day, but it's a bit personal, so I'm not sure yet).
Haha, no wonder Yasmin doesn't like the idea of Pushkari being first. But you can still use the agenda to develop her before her time comes, and who knows, maybe with Pushkari's round (if there will be next round) things will change anyway.
And I swear, both Aevie and Isil scared me shitless once Don't worry, characters are harmless after all. They will only make you feel guilty for being a prick to them, that's something you can live with. XD
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ArthurQF [2017-10-13 01:34:36 +0000 UTC]
OC-Training is amazing for exposing your characters to a wider audience as well as developing them through illustrations! I find your characters absolutely amazing and very interesting.
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SunsetBlazer In reply to ArthurQF [2017-11-01 19:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely. Thank you so much, that means a lot!
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girl-n-herhorse [2017-10-11 19:15:12 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome how OC Training helped develop your story and characters
As for being afraid of your characters, yes. I have quite a few I'm scared of at times
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SunsetBlazer In reply to girl-n-herhorse [2017-11-01 19:13:02 +0000 UTC]
Indeed!
XD Oh yes, I'm sure!
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Akaszik [2017-10-11 19:13:46 +0000 UTC]
I guess you're happy and satisfied that your OCs and setting developed this much. I wish you all the best with puting it all into one novel or graphic novel, for anyone to enjoy. You may like to take an afternoon to read articles about "hot to" outline a novel, so you'll get a structure for your further work.
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SunsetBlazer In reply to Akaszik [2017-11-01 19:12:41 +0000 UTC]
I am, OC-Training was so incredibly helpful to me. Thank you so much! I've done some research on outlining my novel; it's just finding the time and inspiration to work on it.
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