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Published: 2015-05-09 00:11:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3345; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 0
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=meU2gAβ¦feedback please
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[Insert obligatory Predator quote here]
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this is amazing!
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Are they a team, or does he have a jump on that guy?
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gon b a slasher movie in a second
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This is very engrossing. Β The colors are very deep and they make us feel like we are there. Fantastic work!
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Tears of joy at how great your artwork is! Wow! This is Incred....... I Can not Believe my eyes! Just Great Artwork!!
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whoa 
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wow that red really makes everything pop! 
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I'm so not qualified to be giving advice - I actually really like the composition, camera angle and the soldiers' designs, but I think there's a few things that can make this piece even better.Β
It might help to have slightly more contrast on the monster dude in the back because the edges of his arm are fading into the leaves. If you lighten up his body it might fix that problem. Lightening up the leaves in front of the guy closest to us might help the leaves pop more against all the darks on him.
Also, the really sharp edges of the monster dude in the back against the relatively empty sky makes my eye go there and get stuck there, which is a little bit distracting. The edge is just too clean, when almost every other edge in the picture is slightly blurred and doesn't have as much value contrast. If you could blur that edge a little bit somehow, I think it'd help a lot.
Also, I think having very faint clouds in the red sky in the background might help make it look more integrated with the rest of the piece. It's doesn't have any texture on it which makes it a little jarring to look at. Sorry if I seem nitpicky, you already seem to be at a pretty high level.
I hope my feedback helps, good luck on your future pieces. : )Β
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all feedback helps!
most people just endlessly praise, and that gets really tiresome :v
I'll be sure to keep this in mind though, thanks
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That's true - I do get tired of all the praise sometimes too, cause I want to know what's wrong with my pieces XD
You're welcome ^_^
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Aw shiiit...
This is why motion trackers save lives -r being more aware
VERY awesome posing and atmosphere
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[Β insert over used Jurassic park quote here ] And that theme is oddly fitting for this.
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Looks like the Sniper Rifle from Fallout. Just without a scope. Where's it from?
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it's the sniper rifle from fallout without a scope
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Oh, sweet. You wouldn't happen to have a download link for it, would you?
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