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AnnaBelial [2016-06-27 10:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! Thank you for submitting to   for feedback!

Very cute chipmunk! And nicely captured!  
 
Since you submitted this photo for feedback, I have only a suggestion for you:
Would be better to make a focus on the eye of the chipmunk. Maybe if there would be a possibility to bring a bit more light into the scenery you would be able to go on higher aperture and make a focusing more easy. I guess to make a nice capture with proper focusing on this fast moving creature is pretty hard  in anyway, so i would say you might try to sharpen just the eyes a bit in the editing program. If you feel like you can also colorise it a bit, or just bring a bit of warm sun to the picture but keep the shadows cold - so it would look natural.
I'd also recommend you next time to put some more attention to the tale of the chipmunk so it will be more in the scene. Right now i have a small feeling what it's kind of cut off the scene which doesn't bring anything to the composition of the picture.

I'd say i like this noisy background and wouldn't do anything with it. The light is very well diffused and the shadows are not harsh here so one can see the texture very well. I'd love to see more from you! 

I hope this helps, and if you have questions, please ask!

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