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Published: 2009-05-16 09:18:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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I'm writing this in hopes of someone reading(No one is reading.)
I've been feeling down lately.
(But that's not important)
I feel like disappearing.
(You know it would be better)
And I hate it.
(And you hate you)
With every fiber of my being, I hate it.
(But you know that doesn't matter)
I feel the need to feel needed, somewhere, by someone
(You're not)
Anywhere, by anyone
(You're not.)
And so I thought I'd ask of you
If you could silence the demons
And cover the faces
And teach me how to be
(You always ask too much)
And how to silence the demons
(There are no demons)
And how to silence myself.
(You've already done it.)
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Comments: 8
old it may be, but it's good. ^.^ how do you get it to show that spacing?
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It just showed up when I copypasta'd. -shrug-
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Really, very powerful words. And when you were twelve! *incredible* I can really feel the emotions coming through this piece and the set-off thought style is brilliant. This is a really well-done piece and much congrats on that! 
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Wow, amazing. I like it very much. 
Like how the second voice is against the first one.
Interesting idea, good job! :3
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weird. i was just looking for all my angsty 12 year old shit.
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We're PSYCHICALLY LINKED by our angsty shit!!
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