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Published: 2011-08-06 15:47:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 436; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Screams, I know all too well,Tears, greet me each day,
Death, would be a sweet release,
To this hell I live through,
Words like daggers,
Pain, so fucking familiar,
Save me,
Save me from myself.
The darkness engulfs me,
Swallows me whole,
Nothing, I have nothing,
Nothing to live for,
Darkness is all I know,
Save me from the darkness,
Before it takes me away...
Save me...
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Comments: 20
TeaDrinker08 In reply to MagykStormCandles [2011-08-10 22:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's really hard. I think the hardest thing to do is to convince yourself to WANT to live.
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MagykStormCandles In reply to TeaDrinker08 [2011-08-10 23:34:53 +0000 UTC]
Ya. Tis a very hard task indeed.
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Mourning-Star98 [2011-08-06 23:53:50 +0000 UTC]
OMG! I LOVE IT! It's so dark but so beautiful! It consumes your soul! Wonderfully written! Bravo!
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TeaDrinker08 In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-08-08 03:41:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, I love your descriptive language, it makes me very happy.
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Mourning-Star98 In reply to TeaDrinker08 [2011-08-08 04:05:12 +0000 UTC]
Hehe anytime hun You're welcome keep up the great work!
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TeaDrinker08 In reply to Mourning-Star98 [2011-08-08 13:55:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and I will try my best!
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TeaDrinker08 In reply to ShadowKissed101 [2011-08-06 18:38:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Any critique on the piece is greatly appreciated! Anything is awesome!
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ShadowKissed101 In reply to TeaDrinker08 [2011-08-06 19:30:56 +0000 UTC]
anytime. ur an amazing writer
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TeaDrinker08 In reply to Pereyga [2011-08-06 18:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Most of poetry is a bit sad.
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TeaDrinker08 In reply to Pereyga [2011-08-08 02:53:57 +0000 UTC]
I like depressing poetry...
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