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Published: 2006-09-12 11:20:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Let me tell you a tale,that will scare you to the core.
But I shall walk this path,
and you will be clean of gore.
Let me free your soul,
from this time and place.
So that you can feel,
lifeβs true embrace.
Let me take you places,
you would fear to tread.
I will give form to,
the horrors in your head.
Let me arouse those feelings,
that are deep inside.
I will help you deal,
with that you wish to hide.
Let me take the blame,
for these deeds alone.
So that though these actions,
you may atone.
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Comments: 11
proudcloud [2006-11-18 18:27:13 +0000 UTC]
Nice one man. Didnt had problem catching the rythm
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Tech-ed In reply to proudcloud [2006-11-19 12:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank a lot. I am glad you enjoy it!
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Mantisss [2006-09-18 18:47:15 +0000 UTC]
Verrry nice; this could almost be a horror writer's words
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Tech-ed In reply to Mantisss [2006-09-18 20:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
I don't know about the horror thing.
I try to stir emotions in the reader so may be I will chose to be a romantic writer.
Who am I kidding.
Again thanks.
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Mantisss In reply to Tech-ed [2006-09-22 11:23:49 +0000 UTC]
Even a horror writer strives to stir emotions in his or her readers I think that your poem fits my image quite nicely, actually
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Tech-ed In reply to Mantisss [2006-09-22 11:40:54 +0000 UTC]
I agree. I was just being difficult.
Thanks again.
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AdoraBell [2006-09-15 12:11:47 +0000 UTC]
This isn't bad at all. I have some rythm issues but eish, i can;t put my finger on it. I'll reread it ok?
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Tech-ed In reply to AdoraBell [2006-09-15 13:22:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Yip. had to rework it a few time.
Waiting for the feedback.
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AdoraBell In reply to Tech-ed [2006-09-15 13:24:48 +0000 UTC]
IT might take some time...next week only perhaps... me and my big mouth.
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