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Description
Name: Sarah

Age: 20

Height: '5

Weight: 120

Fighting style: Hand-to-Hand

Playable: Yes
-Becomes Playable when the first cut-scene ends at the beginning of the game

Game Inspiration: No More Heroes

Toy: ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I…

--Opening Scene--
The camera pans onto an apartment complex with the main character unlocking her door and going inside.
"God, I hate this stupid job... Why can't people pick up their own damn garbage?...'
She walks over to her couch and sits on it.
"Whatever... Its done now... I don't have to go until I get called again...'
Her phone rings.
"...Are you kidding..."
She gets up and answers the phone.
"Yes? Hello?"
There is a slight pause.
"Listen if there was some kid that puked I'm not-"
    "H-Help me... Sis please..."
She stands there silent for a second.
"...Jeremy?"
The phone hangs up on her and she looks at it.
"...Brother?"
It rings again, she hesitates and answers it again.
"...Hello?"
A female answers back.
"Miss? Is your name Sarah by any chance?"
  "Yes why?"
"There is a pub in your town. Please come to it. I would like to speak with you."
She hangs up.
"Wait!...Dammit!"
Sarah slams the phone down.
"...A bar in the town eh?"
--Scene Ends/ Game playstarts--
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So this is the first of many characters from this little project. I want to try to create a game like feel to this, even though I'm not good at writing. Tell me what you think, did I do alright for my first try?

All characters belong to their respectful owners

Description
Name: Sarah

Age: 20

Height: '5

Weight: 120

Fighting style: Hand-to-Hand

Playable: Yes
-Becomes Playable when the first cut-scene ends at the beginning of the game

Game Inspiration: No More Heroes

Toy: ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I…

--Opening Scene--
The camera pans onto an apartment complex with the main character unlocking her door and going inside.
"God, I hate this stupid job... Why can't people pick up their own damn garbage?...'
She walks over to her couch and sits on it.
"Whatever... Its done now... I don't have to go until I get called again...'
Her phone rings.
"...Are you kidding..."
She gets up and answers the phone.
"Yes? Hello?"
There is a slight pause.
"Listen if there was some kid that puked I'm not-"
    "H-Help me... Sis please..."
She stands there silent for a second.
"...Jeremy?"
The phone hangs up on her and she looks at it.
"...Brother?"
It rings again, she hesitates and answers it again.
"...Hello?"
A female answers back.
"Miss? Is your name Sarah by any chance?"
  "Yes why?"
"There is a pub in your town. Please come to it. I would like to speak with you."
She hangs up.
"Wait!...Dammit!"
Sarah slams the phone down.
"...A bar in the town eh?"
--Scene Ends/ Game playstarts--
------------------------------------
So this is the first of many characters from this little project. I want to try to create a game like feel to this, even though I'm not good at writing. Tell me what you think, did I do alright for my first try?

All characters belong to their respectful owners