HOME | DD
Published: 2002-10-13 09:23:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 149; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
Redirect to original
Description
The new normalPersonalities being ironed
to suit todays society
Blank smiles on blank faces
on blank towns in blank countries
You try to be different
but its no use
your creative fuel has been cut of
at the source, your soul drowned
forever
They say 10 out of 10
people will die
But I disagree.
I say everyones already dead.
One day, you wish, it will
be normal again - Inspirational
Music, poetry and artwork
But it hits you - this is normal
the new normal
And it hurts.
Related content
Comments: 3
sceptical [2002-10-13 12:26:07 +0000 UTC]
well, i like the theme, the content; but not the structure of this.
this could benifit from punctuation, and it would be better as a discussion. this, for me, is not poetry. it's tone is not poetic, no imagery, not a single thread to suggest this is a poem, other than it being in stanzas.
As for the content, i would like to se it focus more deeply into the reasons behind conformity, and the rate at which society oppresses people, and why people choose to conform
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
0o-elly-o0 [2002-10-13 11:13:47 +0000 UTC]
So very true. Noone can be a non comformist in anyway, cause then you're conforming to non comforming. One thing that i hate is all the sluts taht walk around in their little groups.. wearing the same clothes and everything. Chained together.. they are the new normality eh?.
I love this poem. absolutely love it.
Check out my stuff and comment.. please?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0







