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Page 4 of Remote Control. All characters depicted belong to me.
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Just a tip, be sure you place the speech bubbles in a certain order, either left to right or up to down, to know who is supposed to talk first. Because I read their lines and got the impression that one of them was supposed to talk before the other.
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Thanks for the tip. I really had difficulty trying to place the speech bubbles since my panels were already looking cramped. I thought of placing them as close to where the characters talked, but they would cover the characters or important parts of the background. My dialogue for this comic was way longer, almost enough to be a script for an animation, so I had to shorten it somehow.
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Itβs not a total loss though. I am planning on making this a full color when I have the time and will make further edits to the speech bubbles. The text is readable but may feel cramped.
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Ah, cool. Good luck.
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