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Temiree — Flour Sack Animation

Published: 2009-01-16 10:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1527; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 29
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Description Nothing special. My first flour sack animation, done in ToonBoom Learner's Edition. (hence the DIGITAL watermark) I wish I could have done it in Flash since I'm more familiar with that program, but this computer lacks it. (used Flash at school)

I'm pleased with how it turned out, and I learned a few things. I messed up the start a bit, but I know what I did wrong and what I can do to avoid that.

Critique welcome, as long as it's nothing too intense. I'm still an animation noob. xD I know for sure that I'll be using a thinner line next time.
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Comments: 47

WolfAli [2009-01-22 16:52:31 +0000 UTC]

hehee cool keep up the great work

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Temiree In reply to WolfAli [2009-01-23 15:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Will do!

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WolfAli In reply to Temiree [2009-01-25 06:43:25 +0000 UTC]

welcome that great X3

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fanofart555 [2009-01-17 22:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool :3

Y'know, I think you can also do flash animations in Photoshop, too. Make each layer an individual frame, then save it all as a GIF. :3

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Temiree In reply to fanofart555 [2009-01-19 01:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I've tried it once before, but it's really more effort than what it's worth. I'd rather use a program that's dedicated to animation, rather than something that's developed for image editing.

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fanofart555 In reply to Temiree [2009-01-19 16:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I think I'll try to animate some stamps in the future. And isn't animation just another form of image editing? ;3

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Temiree In reply to fanofart555 [2009-01-21 09:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Essentially x3

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fanofart555 In reply to Temiree [2009-01-21 14:53:22 +0000 UTC]

So Photoshop would work! x3

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Temiree In reply to fanofart555 [2009-01-23 16:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the newer versions have an animation part of it. I don't know how to work it very well, but I wouldn't doubt that could work!

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fanofart555 In reply to Temiree [2009-01-24 00:42:23 +0000 UTC]

x3 Even Elements 2.0 has a basic thing for it :3 As I said: just make each layer an individual frame and save it as a GIF.

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TahoeWolf [2009-01-17 16:22:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL, this made me laugh when it fell on his face xD

Sadly, I'm learning too, so I can't really give a proper critique for animation

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Temiree In reply to TahoeWolf [2009-01-19 01:28:47 +0000 UTC]

No worries. Feel free to look at the critique on the animations I post. Perhaps you can learn a thing or two from them as well.

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TahoeWolf In reply to Temiree [2009-01-19 04:49:41 +0000 UTC]

I dont even know how to use the dang program

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Temiree In reply to TahoeWolf [2009-01-19 05:54:48 +0000 UTC]

It doesn't need to be ToonBoom. You can do it in real life, or on Flash, or anything. The principles and concepts of animation are universal.

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TahoeWolf In reply to Temiree [2009-01-19 13:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Your right, but I have Adobe Flash and I have no idea how to use it x3

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Temiree In reply to TahoeWolf [2009-01-21 09:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Then learn! x3

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BlueRazorMane [2009-01-17 10:05:36 +0000 UTC]

pretty smooth work

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Temiree In reply to BlueRazorMane [2009-01-19 01:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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HatlabuFarkas [2009-01-17 08:44:39 +0000 UTC]

go0D job dude

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Temiree In reply to HatlabuFarkas [2009-01-19 01:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Serineko [2009-01-17 05:01:59 +0000 UTC]

I love how the sack flails it's sackish arms when it's about to fall.

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Temiree In reply to Serineko [2009-01-19 01:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Glad you caught that. ^^

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Serineko In reply to Temiree [2009-01-19 19:45:17 +0000 UTC]

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beenachu [2009-01-16 21:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha I love how it jst drops.

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Temiree In reply to beenachu [2009-01-19 01:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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RedRodent [2009-01-16 19:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, faster fall, and try more squash and stretch. The flour bag should be stretched up and down during the fall, and then flattened (and then returned to normal) when it hits ground! Otherwise, this is pretty darn good, especially for a first try!

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Temiree In reply to RedRodent [2009-01-19 02:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I gotta practice a bit with the squash and stretch technique. Certain shapes and forms are a bit confusing when I want to apply that principle to them. If you pause, the flour sack came off kind of like a moon at one part, but perhaps a more vertical stretch would work better. Thank you!

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HMMurdock [2009-01-16 18:04:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe that looks great, good job dude.

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Temiree In reply to HMMurdock [2009-01-19 02:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye!

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HMMurdock In reply to Temiree [2009-01-19 02:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Thou ist welcome

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quartervirus-archive [2009-01-16 16:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Awww, it's so cute!

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Temiree In reply to quartervirus-archive [2009-01-19 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Heehee, glad you like it

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DCLeadboot [2009-01-16 16:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Heh, heh... rather amusing little short, there!
Reminds me of that sequence in Sleeping Beauty where (after we get past that boring bit with Rose/Aurora and Prince Phillip) the Three Good Fairies resort to using magic to get the work done. And yes, a sack of flour actually walks across the table and crouches beside the bowl to have its contents measured out for Rose's 16th birthday cake!

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Temiree In reply to DCLeadboot [2009-01-19 02:11:15 +0000 UTC]

I haven't seen that movie in a LONG time. Probably not since I was a toddler. I really ought to go back and watch some old Disney feature films. I haven't seen one, in again, a long time.

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Lycanofthewinds [2009-01-16 15:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Poor sack. xD

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Temiree In reply to Lycanofthewinds [2009-01-22 07:46:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, poor thing. He has no nerve endings to feel pain, but still!

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Lycanofthewinds In reply to Temiree [2009-01-22 08:00:07 +0000 UTC]

I wonder what he was filled with. Love?

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Temiree In reply to Lycanofthewinds [2009-01-23 16:55:55 +0000 UTC]

And flour.

Love and flour.

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Lycanofthewinds In reply to Temiree [2009-01-23 22:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Should we make cookie with-err for him? x3

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Temiree In reply to Lycanofthewinds [2009-01-24 11:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Why not both? >:3

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Lycanofthewinds In reply to Temiree [2009-01-24 14:32:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you think. xD

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SonicHomeboy [2009-01-16 15:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Everything looks great up until the sack falls. I think it should fall much quicker.

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Temiree In reply to SonicHomeboy [2009-01-22 07:46:22 +0000 UTC]

I agree. I'll it in mind for future flour sack animations. Thanks!

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SonicHomeboy In reply to Temiree [2009-01-22 16:21:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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SpartanNumber029 In reply to SonicHomeboy [2009-01-16 16:42:04 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you there; it should fall at the same speed as the rest of the movements in the clip.

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amara1023 [2009-01-16 13:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Keep up the nice work!

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Temiree In reply to amara1023 [2009-01-22 07:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye!

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