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ThatGuyOnTheStreet — Father. [NSFW]
Published: 2004-07-14 02:49:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 796; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 94
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Description I was a nice kid.
Always trying to stay out of trouble.
Doing my hardest to excel in school.

I wanted to make you proud.

Watching Brittany when you were at work, or at the bar, or in the motel with one of those fucking sluts.
God, she was such a bitch to me.
Utter hell, I’ll tell ya.
Making huge messes all over the house, just to watch me clean ‘em.

But you wouldn’t know about that, would you?

I cooked, I cleaned.
I was the mom.
I covered for you when the tax collectors came.
When the cops came knocking, I had alibis for you.
But you didn’t care.

All you did was fuck around.

You slept, ate, drank, worked, and came home AFTER you went out.
You had plenty of opportunities to be with us.
But no, you decided to be a selfish, slimy fuck.

Sure, you made money; but you spent it all on useless shit.
A big-screen T.V.
New furniture.
A pool.
A motorcycle.
A boat.
You remember, don’t you?
We didn’t need any of it.
You bought it so you could forget.

Right?
Am I right?
SHUT THE FUCK UP!

You don’t know what it was like.
You weren’t there.

I lived in constant fear.

Filthy fuckers coming to the house, asking for you.

I had to hold a knife in my hand, Dad.
They tried to get in the house, DAD.
THEY WANTED BRITTANY, DAD.

IS THAT HOW YOU RAISE YOUR SON?

But you wouldn’t know, would you?
I ASKED YOU A FUCKING QUESTION!

You weren’t my father.
You were some guy who came in and out of MY house.
You didn’t take the time to thank me.
Why should you?

I’M JUST YOUR FUCKING SON!
RIGHT?

Well I’m fucking tired of all this GODDAMN BULLSHIT!
I CAN’T FUCKING TAKE IT ANYMORE!
YOU MAKE ME SICK!

I remember when I wanted to be just like you.
I thought you were perfect.
Damn, I was wrong.
I was dead wrong.

Now look at you, cowering at my feet.
Do you feel weak?
Scared?
What’s going to happen?
Do you know?

What was that?
I can’t hear you, DAD.
DID YOU SAY SOMETHING TO ME, DAD?

Do you need me to call 911?
There’s a bullet hole in your leg, Dad!
Oh no!
What should I do?
WHAT THE FUCK SHOULD I DO?!

I THINK I SHOULD LEAVE YOU HERE!

Like you left me.
Sounds like a good deal, right?
I had to deal with it; now it’s your turn.
Not for long though.
Don’t worry.
An eye for an eye.
You understand, right?

Wait…Are you crying?

WHAT’S THAT, DAD?!

YOU’RE SORRY?!

Oh, that’s rich.
You’re sorry.

Wonderful.

I can forgive you now, RIGHT?

I DON’T FUCKING THINK SO, YOU PIECE OF SHIT!
YOU DON’T DESERVE ANY PITY.

I WAS FUCKING THIRTEEN!
NOW I’M MORE OF AN ADULT THAN YOU!

HOW THE FUCK DO YOU THINK I GOT THROUGH ALL THIS?
ALL THE SHIT I WENT THROUGH!
FOR YOU!

HOW THE FUCK DID YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF?

KNOWING WHAT YOU WERE DOING TO ME DIDN’T KILL YOU?!

Then I suppose I’ll have to do it myself.
Don’t worry, Brittany will be fine.
Not like you’d care anyway, you fucking heartless bastard.
Guess it’s my turn, huh?
Bye, Dad.



I love you.
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Comments: 113

ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to ??? [2007-11-27 01:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Gracias.

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moldygrape [2007-07-17 01:18:39 +0000 UTC]

If I didn't know you, I'd say this is cliche.

It'd be a good slam.
You should record yourself reading it. (And send to me.)

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2007-07-17 08:26:56 +0000 UTC]

It really would sound good recorded. I think when I get my video camera outta the box, I'll make a video of me reading it.

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SkrinkLaDaSkrod [2007-04-23 19:18:49 +0000 UTC]

This made me cry.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to SkrinkLaDaSkrod [2007-04-24 01:07:19 +0000 UTC]

This is hella old.

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SkrinkLaDaSkrod In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2007-04-24 03:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know.

But still, it's sad.

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DarkRocky [2006-08-08 16:42:39 +0000 UTC]

jesus fucking christ man....

holy crap. i got chills reading this.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to DarkRocky [2006-08-22 01:54:36 +0000 UTC]

I guess I'll say thanks.

Glad ya felt somethin'.

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DarkRocky In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2006-08-22 03:37:09 +0000 UTC]

its very well written. and because my mind is aweosme liek that, i played out the whole thing mentally based on that picture. and it was like pulp fiction meets teenage justice.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to DarkRocky [2006-08-26 19:23:17 +0000 UTC]

That is a badass compliment, thank you.

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DarkRocky In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2006-08-27 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you mistah o'shea

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e-boo [2005-04-24 17:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit. This is a fucking awesome poem!!!!!! Love all the emotion...I know how it feels to have a scumbag for a father too. Love it love it love it.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to e-boo [2005-04-24 21:27:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks honey! (A shame you know the feeling though, but still pretty glad you can relate.)

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e-boo In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-04-25 00:13:48 +0000 UTC]

welcomes! wheeee.

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gemini86 [2005-01-13 22:05:53 +0000 UTC]

wow, the drew me in like it was drug or something. Dramatic stuff *claps*

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to gemini86 [2005-01-14 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you darling.

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murderyourmemory [2004-12-31 05:24:48 +0000 UTC]

wow... i never lived with my dad.. even if i wanted to my mom wouldnt let me.. i dont think i would want to

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to murderyourmemory [2004-12-31 05:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Dads are usually quite fucked up.

Agh.

Thanks for the fave, by the way.

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murderyourmemory In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-01 22:10:03 +0000 UTC]

no prob.

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themuffinyamber [2004-09-23 03:33:27 +0000 UTC]

:claps: Wow...

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to themuffinyamber [2004-09-23 03:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Oi, thank ya very much sweetie!

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themuffinyamber In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-09-23 03:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow that reply was like instant, i just now commented And it was a good story, makes you want to keep reading. The emotion is great

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chameleon-18 [2004-09-13 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I have been gone for a really long time. And I'm sorry I have been, but wow what awesome work to come back to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Holy hell that's amazing! ::bows down the king of the duel:: I read your friends too, but your's is way, way better.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to chameleon-18 [2004-09-15 00:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much; this was really a hard piece to write, and I'm so happy you like it!

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chameleon-18 In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-09-17 20:43:17 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome... I'm surprised that I have come back so quickly, but I managed to find time to come back and I'm glad. You are always very welcome, you always deserve the praise that is bestowed upon you!!!

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eddywhite [2004-09-10 19:15:17 +0000 UTC]

Simply Stunning, Its just so...real, You have a vivid imagination, It really is awesome, The raw anger in it is enough to make anyone with a heart cry, Well done mate.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to eddywhite [2004-09-14 15:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, man. I'm really glad you liked it.

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eddywhite In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-10-03 09:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Just reading it again, Seriously, bloody incredible mate.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to eddywhite [2004-10-07 23:51:22 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, thank you once more!

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bEsTxkEpTxsEcReT [2004-09-05 00:19:38 +0000 UTC]

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lol wow..*speechless* definitely. *is still in awe*.....holy...crap...lol

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to bEsTxkEpTxsEcReT [2004-09-05 05:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much! Very glad you liked it.

The favorite is infinietely appreciated as well, love.

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bEsTxkEpTxsEcReT In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-09-05 14:42:11 +0000 UTC]

well deserved

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-09-05 05:39:03 +0000 UTC]

*infintely

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artisticlonging [2004-09-02 05:09:12 +0000 UTC]

how real?
my experience with fathers so far have not been very good..whether they be my own or others.
lots of love

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artisticlonging In reply to artisticlonging [2004-09-02 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]

ive told my mom often that we should get my dad assasinated
normally I would insert a long comment about my dad buuuut Id think it better to tell you if you were willing to listen to it
wild guess-is that why you moved?(im way off arent I)

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to artisticlonging [2004-09-02 05:15:21 +0000 UTC]

All real. Except for the part where I shoot him. That's fantasy. (Ok, that was kinda harsh. Excuse me.)

There were a few things I wasn't willing to write down though.

Lots of love to you as well, darling.

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moldygrape [2004-08-05 07:29:44 +0000 UTC]

*complete awe* This is the best peice of work i have ever read. No fucking doubt it's going in my favs. Kick ass job, man. KICK ASS.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-06 00:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

It really means a lot to me, thanks again!

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CO6655321 [2004-08-03 04:34:48 +0000 UTC]

Sound's like something coming from enimen's mouth. Very angsty, nice work

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to CO6655321 [2004-08-03 05:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Kinda does like something he'd say, huh? Nice job pointing that out.

I'm taking that as a compliment, so thanks!

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CO6655321 In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-08-03 11:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Good, I was hoping you wouldn't take it offensive

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to CO6655321 [2004-08-03 17:11:09 +0000 UTC]

While I don't exactly worship his music, he DOES speak his mind without regard for censors or any of that. So I respect that.

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uninspiration [2004-08-02 05:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Intense. It reminds me of something... not sure what... it feels familiar. Not in an "I've heard this before and it's unoriginal way" though. No, it's plenty original. It just feels... I dunno... deja vu maybe? Whatever. Anyway, keep up the good work, dude.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to uninspiration [2004-08-02 06:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very, very, very much.

I am really glad that you felt like you knew the event(s).

I was hoping that I could draw someone in like that.

Once again, thanks!

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effervescant [2004-07-31 07:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I like yours more. I think it's because you spent more time on the emotional aspect and "conversation" type prose rather than the typical storyline. Still, both pieces were well-made. Your's is just more appealing to me. Great work!

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to effervescant [2004-08-02 06:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you appreciated it!

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gothpeoplesuckmyass [2004-07-31 04:27:37 +0000 UTC]

this is mer:

Holy Crap Nick, I know this is a late comment, but I thought, that your writing, came down from your heart, and there's no way it could be better. Everything was shot at me like a bullet, and I loved it. I can't end this comment with anything but... a thank you, for every person that makes a comment saying how much you touched them. I have never seen anything like it. Enjoy your art, talent, and love of all, plainly , you.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to gothpeoplesuckmyass [2004-08-02 07:04:23 +0000 UTC]

No, Mercedes...I must say...Thank you.
It's absolutely awesome to hear that you love my writing.
Really, it is.

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gothpeoplesuckmyass In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-08-02 18:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Nick, what do you expect? And if you don't, expect it.

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gothpeoplesuckmyass In reply to gothpeoplesuckmyass [2004-08-03 02:58:37 +0000 UTC]

good. A lesson learned. lol.

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