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Published: 2011-08-23 01:51:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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I saw the world endWhen I looked into your eyes
The color blue of purity
A little stab in the night
My hopes and dreams were broken
Like the bottle in your hand
And I wept with all my soul to you
Like only a child can.
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yeah, i just decided not to enter the contest, since i really should have been focussing on homework
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yeah...
i am jesus of nazareth son of orflec the butcher
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It's a line from bo burnham's show words words words.
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Yeah, for this one poem contest I want to do.
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nah, i'll tell ya on the other chat, I guess that just means i need to make it more clear.
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are you makeing it in to a game to see who guses right
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not really, I just don't want to spoil it by saying it in the comments
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see than its a game~
maybe i just didnt get it dont worry
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it's chill, it wasn't that good a poem really it's just what came into my head.
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i think it was good but i guse we both think diffrent meanings of the poem
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you know how some people think a song means some thing then anothere thinks it menas som ething els
(ima go die my head ^_^ bye b back in while)
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yeah, but I mean, what do you think it means? And what colour????
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like a burgundy red the one i had at hannahs sept more dark im also thinking of puting extensions on but i have to save up money
i think it ment
a blue eyed drunken ass whole killed a little girl
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Hmm, well that's pretty close. It's actually these couple of characters that I have in my head, a brother and a sister. The older sister was abused by the father and in turn took it out on her little brother. The bottle was probably the dad's I don't really know since it just sounded good, but is rather inconsequential. I'm interested in abusive women right now since it's not too common, and especially from a rather young girl (she's about fourteen). Also just that blue eyes are associated with innocence and purity, so blue eyed villains are rare (though "icy" blue eyes are an exception). It's a different version of the story "Lush" by Natasha Friend.
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well i was close it was an abused chick
i didnt see the brother though so he prob just stayed in your head and didnt go int o mine
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Yeah, most likely. THat's the problem with poetry, sometimes key points are hard to get across.
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yea the same with art, you may see the painting as sad but others might see them as happy because the colors remind them of some thing happy
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Really? I don't usually connect personally with things like that.
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i would expect you too for some reason.
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Nope. A lot of my personality is borderline sociopathic because though I love people and connect great with others, I just.... don't. In my head I am separate from all of it.
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yea but its not about connecting with people its just about connecting with your self
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Memories? Memories are about connections with the outside world that you internalize, which I have and everything, they just don't come to mind. I live more in my own invention.
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you mean you live in the present and not the past
for some reason every thing i see or hear always reminds me of some thing or some one i guse i live in my past
memories/emotions are not about connecting with your surroundings or connection with any one...its simply your self and how you saw things and how you felt about it
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When I remember it's like I'm seeing in third person.
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yea but cant you see your self
can you see how you felt?
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Well, I remember it, but I don't feel like it's me.
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hummmmmm
yea but you can see how the other person is feelign and then you can tell how they felt(they being you)
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What? I know how I felt, I just don't feel like my past self is "me" and so I don't connect well to it. It's different for stuff like talking about memories, which I do connect with. I just don't automatically feel something because I am reminded of something.
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how interesting
you see i connect emotionally more than real life.
like during that time i dont cry or get angry or any thing but then when i look back on it, or when i hire or see some thing that reminds me of it it bothers me
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i just try not to die and not be bored hahaha
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I like the future too though.
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i like to pretend and plan out my future
its fun even thoguh i know it wont go like that
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Yeah, I wish it would sometimes.
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yea i do to
but life is a bitch and things dont work like that lol
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Well, it would be a little boring really. I mean all that I imagine only involves people I already know.
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yea but most of the manga i make are peopel i already know hehehhe
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I never really think just about us in the future, until I imagine who would have what kids.
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your really addicted to people haveing kids hahaha
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Well, yeah, but not like, zillions. And most of my friends would adopt I think.
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yea i one of those
what got you obsessed with that though?
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but why do you want a big family its really rare to find some one like that this day in age
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