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AmmySay [2012-11-25 21:39:10 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS!!!! I'm sorry I haven't been on in FOREVER

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curiosirie [2012-11-23 21:26:08 +0000 UTC]

First off BAWW. SIBLING LOVE. I LOVE IT. And I'm loving the dynamic poses again. c:

But onward to the problems at hand:
You told me you noticed Crystal's butt is wonky, so it's good to see that you can find your own mistakes, but why her butt is wonky is this: one cheek is progressively higher than the other, and the other cheek is completely deflated. Like someone popped it. And her breast (another thing you've pointed out) is like...at her belly button xD Granted, it's always hard to draw breasts from behind but you gotta know that they move with arms as well xD
As for Neo, where is his torso?! It's like, chest, stomach(?) and then BAM LEGS AND CROTCH. Men have always baffled me...until I saw them naked (too much?) it just takes practice to get the torso the right length. And holy cow, his leg is short; I want to say that you tried to make it look like he was taking a step back, but you used the wrong sort of action for it; since he's initially at a 3/4 angle, just tilting the leg back a wee bit would have worked and then shorten the longer leg would've made it look like she pushed him. But in this case, we'll just say he's suffering from polio or something of the sort because really hun, that leg is short.

But keep practicing! You get better with every drawing you do, I promise : )

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