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Published: 2012-06-17 22:56:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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The Warden poped in and it was non other then Brian Epstine. He smiled and looked at us and said "Being tied up is a bitch isn't it.... oh and have fun girls. He smiled at us and walk out of our cell block. Jane was crying and I was trying to calm her down. See we had all found out that we had been sentenced to death and would be called the next day to our demised. I couldn't sleep. It scared me to think that some one could beleive that I could actullay kill someone... I still can't stab my juice pouch hard engough..... just saying.We lined up the first to go was Pattie. She was beautiful and died with such grace and beauty. We where crying and shaking knowing that we were next... she was followed by Cynthia, then it was my turn I walk up with shaky knees and as they put the noose around my neak I shut my eyes. That is when I bolted up right in my bed in a cold sweat and I look to see Ringo back at side. It was just a bad dream I said to myself I got up and fix myself some tea lord knows I couldn't sleep from all that. If I learned one thing from this dream is not to ever mess with Brian.... now to share it with the group
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PetZombieRabbit [2012-06-18 00:03:22 +0000 UTC]
sometimes it helps to just print it off and read through it in a different context. That's what I've done I'll make sure to read some of your other stuff, because maybe it makes more sense in the story. Like, is there a reason he's called The Warren and not The Warden?
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thepixie1234 In reply to PetZombieRabbit [2012-06-18 00:32:54 +0000 UTC]
.... no I just cart'n spel
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PetZombieRabbit In reply to thepixie1234 [2012-06-18 00:55:27 +0000 UTC]
that's too bad. I just read "White Houses." It's very well written, I hardly minded the spelling errors. Don't let it hold you back, because you still have talent as opposed to most people I come across.
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thepixie1234 In reply to PetZombieRabbit [2012-06-18 01:12:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you :3 that made my day (:
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PetZombieRabbit [2012-06-17 23:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Please edit your spelling before publishing, I'm sorry, especially since I haven't read the rest.
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thepixie1234 In reply to PetZombieRabbit [2012-06-17 23:40:06 +0000 UTC]
sorry my computers being a but on me .....
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