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TheseWingsofDarkness — sixty-five
#anger #disconnected #emotions #feeling #heart #hurt #protection #protective #rage #sister #static #fire #100themeschallenge
Published: 2018-06-25 11:34:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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i was beginning to get used tothis disconnection
from my heart
and the static in my brain
it became a sort of empty comfort
[not quite right
but a welcome fit all the same]
but you tore that away from me
you filled my veins with fiery anger
left my mind reeling
and my fists curled
and my teeth clenched
i don't think you realise
how close i was to filling
your fragile heart with pain
you should know that
i won't let you hurt her
Comments: 11
Harsh and severe. Good one.
I find the composition of words perfectly fitted to the mood.
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Thank you.
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Great work - I agree with the other comments here. The emotion really comes through!
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Thank you!
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If anyone ever hurts her, I'll be after them too
Again, your poetry skills are amazing
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Yay, more people to protect her (not that she needs too much protecting, she can generally handle things herself XD)
And thank you!
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Ah, thank you so much
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This is how anger is also a beautiful emotion...
You're a great brother I can tell you that ^^
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Ah, thank you so much^^
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