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Published: 2018-06-25 11:34:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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i was beginning to get used tothis disconnection
from my heart
and the static in my brain
it became a sort of empty comfort
[not quite right
but a welcome fit all the same]
but you tore that away from me
you filled my veins with fiery anger
left my mind reeling
and my fists curled
and my teeth clenched
i don't think you realise
how close i was to filling
your fragile heart with pain
you should know that
i won't let you hurt her
Comments: 11
tammar-in-wonderland [2018-07-01 15:01:02 +0000 UTC]
Harsh and severe. Good one.
I find the composition of words perfectly fitted to the mood.
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TheseWingsofDarkness In reply to tammar-in-wonderland [2018-07-02 10:37:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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TheSmileyDinosaur [2018-06-27 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]
Great work - I agree with the other comments here. The emotion really comes through!
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TheseWingsofDarkness In reply to TheSmileyDinosaur [2018-06-30 10:18:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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Quirky-Sebby [2018-06-26 02:12:46 +0000 UTC]
If anyone ever hurts her, I'll be after them too
Again, your poetry skills are amazing
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TheseWingsofDarkness In reply to Quirky-Sebby [2018-06-30 10:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Yay, more people to protect her (not that she needs too much protecting, she can generally handle things herself XD)
And thank you!
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TheseWingsofDarkness In reply to foxseason [2018-06-30 10:19:28 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much
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286yoha [2018-06-25 16:43:51 +0000 UTC]
This is how anger is also a beautiful emotion...
You're a great brother I can tell you that ^^
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TheseWingsofDarkness In reply to 286yoha [2018-06-30 10:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much^^
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