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TheStrangercalledJim — A Song for Devastated Love...
Published: 2006-09-16 20:22:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Did I never stop to think
The hurt and destruction I caused you
Or did I never realise?

Separate beds, separate rooms
I realise now what I miss
One of the very few chances we get

Broken bones mean nothing
to the hurt I feel now
Compounded by the fact
I never cared enough

Now just a third wheel
Hearing your apologies
Through other people

It’s why my door can’t be opened
As easily as before
Even your smile makes me realise

The one thing I can take from this
Is I now know how to
Destroy the perfect muse

Just hate her for the trivial things
It will soon drive her away
Yet the hard times are yet to come

Friendship from the fires of passion
The embers take longer to cool
The surface may reflect what you want
But thrust your hand into the ashes

And you’ll still be burnt
By my scathing remarks
Undeliberate
But from a side of me
That knows not how to cope

I never realised
How much I could hurt
Someone I love
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Comments: 10

mourningair [2006-10-01 16:54:30 +0000 UTC]

aw.... hope you're okay

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to mourningair [2006-10-10 14:31:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm good, as is said people always say it'll get better with time, although if it's a rash you're better off with ointment

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NaamahsServant [2006-09-18 05:39:50 +0000 UTC]

beautifull hope alls k.

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to NaamahsServant [2006-09-18 11:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks chick, everythings not so bad and i'm dealing with the vaguely mature and unchildish way but it still hurts you know...

..but fuck it lol

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rider-on-the-storm [2006-09-17 06:13:30 +0000 UTC]

woman problems, eh?
pretty nice write man

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2006-09-18 11:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah man, and cheers for the good words....i needed something to kick me off writing again and it seems that creation is borne out of destruction...

..so there's always some good no matter what you do

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nebechard [2006-09-16 23:46:42 +0000 UTC]



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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to nebechard [2006-09-18 11:56:30 +0000 UTC]

hehe...thanks for the hugeroos

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sudylt [2006-09-16 23:01:54 +0000 UTC]

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to sudylt [2006-09-18 11:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks chick...is that for me or for my writing?

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