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TheStrangercalledJim — Demisery
Published: 2006-01-04 19:03:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Here I am just sitting prettySpouting words just like a dictionary
Time is all I have with you
Space is all I need from you
Held inside this tiny room
My head suspended like a boom
Hearing every word you say
I may just walk away
But your light fills me
Burning deep inside me
Reflecting mirrors within my mind
Your essence makes me blind
A single shot with your eyes
Levels my thoughts to the ground
I could never leave your side
I just couldn’t abide
Your demise
I have to go before you
The sight of your eyes
Closing for the last time
Would never make me still
My world would end
My bones would shatter
Without your touch, your kiss, your love
I border on obsession
But reach the edge of your grave
How could it be your time?
Before mine?
So I come here to help you
Digging deeper with my hands
I have you once again
Resting against my side once more
I take your hand from you
Your remains covering fresh satin sheets
But I don’t care, you’re here
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Comments: 6
I love this. I rhythm is very nice and the words are quite chilling. Very nice.
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Thank you....i hoped to give some depth to my work but pieces like this are pretty rare in my experience...i'm a problem hoarder...i need to experience everything!
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I'm almost crying here! 
A beautiful poem my friend.
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Thanks...i don't often get anyone checking out my writing, if you ever wondered what style of music i write for...it's more experimental and progressive rock rhythms.
Cheers
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very chilling. and beautiful in a dark, nick cave-ish kind of way.
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Thanks...i 'tend to write in a Omar Rodriguez-Lopez style usually, abstract and narrative but i went more with a narrative emotional feel with this song.
Thanks again
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