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TheStrangercalledJim — Time Has Come
Published: 2004-12-05 22:58:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 32; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Archaic institutions that no longer have no powerOnce a struggle for their principles which had no meaning
Sets of rules and law created by madmen and hypocrites
Those that uphold simple laws break others in secret
Sadistic power mongers that have no grasp
Reaching from their prisons, coffins or nursing homes
Their words go unlistened
Sarcastically dismissed
Deservedly ignored
By the generations that they scarred
The message is an easy one
Treat your people well
Make their problems leave them
Don’t put yours on their shoulders
They have no separate strength
But together they will break you
And force your words back down your throat
Like prisoners with morals
Not uncommon, not untrue
They will come for you
And the mercy you did not show
Will flood your eyes
When redemption doesn’t come
Just pain, constant arduous pain
No death, no suicidal way out
Cowardice solves no problems
Your life lingering under their control
Those laws that you created
Used to keep you in your self-made hell
Who cares about you
No one
Even family ignores
Resign yourself to death
As soon as you were born
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Comments: 2
Well, I don't have a critique for you because I am only quickly passing through and don't have time, but I noticed that you tried to use italics and end them in the middle of the piece. But you didn't do it right. I thought I'd show you how if you didn't already know.
To BOLD, you need to type "b" before the word or phrase and type "/b" after the word or phrase. Both of these must be contained in brackets like this <>.
I works the same for italics and underline by using "i" "/i" and "u" "/u" respectively also contained in brackets <>.
Hope this helps, of course, with my luck, you've already been taught how to do this
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Thats not a problem, i completely forgot about this piece until you brought it to my attention and i think there was a slight font error as the HTML coding was correct but the writing seemed not to reflect it.
Thanks for pointing it out, i hate looking like an amateur!
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