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TheStrangercalledJim β€” Your Awakening
Published: 2006-06-27 10:31:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Indecisive funerary dirges fill the air
Complicated melancholic feelings choke the dirt
Nothing remain for the descendents of these sins
Intertwined corpses of the everlasting light

Existence becomes meaningless
As long as the earth is here
Killing past kings and queens
Prove against their future wrongs

You heard my last cry as I plunged in the knife
Wearing my crown of blood-soaked fingers
Victims of the vicious dexterity of my slaughter
Next will be your daughter

I have no tears to fall, no heart to ache
All is black and solid stone here
All but stops me from escaping
Are the walls of your mind

But am I real or just pure thoughts
Your own sick twisted imagination
Gorging itself on your unlimited life of schizophrenic paranoia
I am your dreams gone to seed
And your nightmares given life

The desert is no refuge
Just another hidden tome
You have yet to read aloud
While resting peacefully in your dead son’s home
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Comments: 13

FrozenWinterTear [2008-07-02 23:24:04 +0000 UTC]

I like this one too. Very strong feelings and very well expressed.

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to FrozenWinterTear [2008-07-07 20:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, hopefully some of my work is having more of a direction now as I'm currently attempting to do lead vocals for a band

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FrozenWinterTear In reply to TheStrangercalledJim [2008-07-21 23:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Good luck with it!

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to FrozenWinterTear [2008-07-23 21:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, keep in touch and if i ever get anything recorded I'll let you know

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FrozenWinterTear In reply to TheStrangercalledJim [2008-07-23 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to FrozenWinterTear [2008-08-04 05:33:59 +0000 UTC]

hehehe

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FrozenWinterTear [2008-07-02 23:22:50 +0000 UTC]

I like this one too. Very strong feelings and very well expressed.

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nebechard [2006-06-27 16:48:34 +0000 UTC]

"I am your dreams gone to seed
And your nightmares given life "

Best lines of the whole poem.
Love the dark imagry and languid descriptions.

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to nebechard [2006-06-27 18:16:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much chick, and i appreciate the favourite on it too...I've been more in the mood for writing recently but i think i just need to have more outside influence on certain things...

Seeing as my photgraphy side is not progressing so well :/

Hopefully the context of the poetry is more precise than my recent offerings

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nebechard In reply to TheStrangercalledJim [2006-06-27 18:23:19 +0000 UTC]

We all go through phases like that, but don't worry it won't be permanent. And it's also nice to see different sides of artists' work!

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to nebechard [2006-06-27 18:36:22 +0000 UTC]

I know, randomly, the result will be me buying a more capable camera both digital and film

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rider-on-the-storm [2006-06-27 12:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!
thats a good write, it can totally be turned into a creepy song

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TheStrangercalledJim In reply to rider-on-the-storm [2006-06-27 12:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Do you think so man?....i still can't remember why i did't put it up..:/ i think the tone i was heading for was haunting as it's about a woman surrounded by death...

i'm glad it blew you away! lol

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