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Published: 2015-11-05 13:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 678; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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What I am currently working on...Grapes and left side of the bed still incomplete... I might change the left side of the wall too...
the stock I used as reference... I did change things to fit my composition / idea better
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ChristineMarieArt [2015-11-05 14:48:06 +0000 UTC]
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Hello, first of all this gorgeous work so far! My only critique at this point would be that the stone wall in the front (not in shadow) is distracting to the figures, my eye directly gets pulled there. Maybe soften the detail where it's more abstract? Your light and shadows are wonderful. I love the the skull and the fabric, material is very well done. That is really the only critique I have, and of course your still in progress. I look forward to seeing your updates, I will have to follow so that I can keep up. I hope I was helpful e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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TheVirusHimself In reply to ChristineMarieArt [2015-11-06 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique the wall is bothering me as well :/ Ill have to go over it again I suppose I might ligten up the blacks in the shadows a touch for a more neutral background too, I think a slight yellow glaze to finish it all off and this one will be finished
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ChristineMarieArt In reply to TheVirusHimself [2015-11-06 04:10:32 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like you know exactly what your doing, Β can't wait to see the finished piece
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voister [2015-11-05 16:08:17 +0000 UTC]
I get it. Maybe a little more distress on her face. Then I would believe in it.
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TheVirusHimself [2015-11-05 13:11:06 +0000 UTC]
I have been staring at this for too long and I can use a fresh set of eyes... fire away.
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