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TheWhiteWolf07 — Hunting With Wolves
Published: 2005-02-27 12:59:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3660; Favourites: 155; Downloads: 122
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Description As I look up into the starry sky
I see a ball of light that catches my eye
It lights up the trees and the ground below
It is the same as the full moon from weeks ago

Just then a rustle in the bushes from up ahead
The sound of a creature who saw us and fled
My allies and I spring to action and give chase
We all run at an even, steady pace

Dodging and darting throughout the trees
We hear the rustles carried through the breeze
Our pray that we are chasing trips up ahead
Within seconds we are upon it and its dead

I take another look up at the full moon
and I let out a howl through the night of June
I speak to the other wolves in the pack
We are wolves so you deer better watch your back
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Comments: 20

Graphicsforall [2016-08-13 19:28:16 +0000 UTC]

You're very talented in writing. Do you, by any chance, have a user on wattpad? If so, I'd love to check it out.

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InsanelyCute [2015-03-27 22:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Shouldn't that be "Our prey"? Just saying. I like the atmosphere of this one a lot      !

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ponymaster256 [2013-07-05 02:51:51 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT I LOVE WOLVES

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gummie99 [2010-04-06 00:22:19 +0000 UTC]

nice! this is an instant fav! ive loved wolves ever since i can remember!

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Adimbo [2010-03-29 16:27:22 +0000 UTC]

This is great I find it very easy to visualise the wolves view its very good

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DaniiScienceAbuse [2010-03-27 09:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem, I could see the images in my head.

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leecaria [2009-11-11 19:18:58 +0000 UTC]

i really like your poem and was wondering if i could use them in a little short syory i'm writing. the storyis just for fun. so.. what do you say? please?

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xLunaxDarkangelx [2009-06-25 20:08:35 +0000 UTC]

so cool

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ladymahayla [2008-11-22 04:25:28 +0000 UTC]

good job im nuts for wolves

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Brimseye [2008-03-27 04:54:25 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! I like it a lot!

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Indubitably-Kat [2006-12-23 21:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^

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wolfboyfourteen [2006-04-15 15:05:36 +0000 UTC]

sweet

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bailekris [2005-03-07 01:17:10 +0000 UTC]

wow very good!!! I likey.

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lullabies [2005-03-02 11:07:21 +0000 UTC]

you've created beautiful imagery here, and your wording is great. i especially liked the third stanza. great poem

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hero-of-light [2005-03-02 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]

awsome!~

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hero-of-light [2005-03-02 04:27:57 +0000 UTC]

awsome!~

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hero-of-light [2005-03-02 04:27:55 +0000 UTC]

awsome!~

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TheaAtherea [2005-02-28 00:12:02 +0000 UTC]

lovely
I like it a lot....

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TheWhiteWolf07 In reply to TheaAtherea [2005-02-28 00:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TheaAtherea In reply to TheWhiteWolf07 [2005-02-28 00:19:06 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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