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Zoey opened her eyes, body shaking, and felt so sore. She felt like she had been beaten by a baseball pat repeatedly, but saw that she had no visible injuries besides the ones zombie had given her. She did observe that she was topless and her pants were ripped and torn at. Her bare feet scrapped against the building's crude floor."Fuck, what happened..." Zoey stood up and instantly felt her head throbbing. She recalled that she was with a particular cute mechanic, sharing a rather intimate kissing moment before blacking out, but he couldn't have...no. He wouldn't take advantage of her, besides she didn't feel 'strange down there'. But that didn't explain why she was naked besides her torn jeans and quivering in a dark room.
"So you're up..." Zoey heard in a familiar voice. A light was clicked on and blared into her eyes. She quickly wrapped her arms around her to hide her breasts from the gamble who smiled at her calmly.
"What is this?" She snapped, baring her teeth at the unwanted man. He simply chuckled in response. "What's so funny, huh? Did you do this? Where's Ellis? Huh? And everyone else?"
"Don't mind them..." Nick pulled a chair up and sat on it backwards, with his legs parted, still smiling at her. He drew a hand pistol from behind his back and aimed it at her. "Now...why don't you put your scrawny little arms down, huh?" He winked at her, while she simply growled, but obliged. No way was he going to die by gun fire during a zombie apocalypse. Nick sucked his teeth, making a tsk noise at her. "Well, I guess he liked you for a reason...come in here, buddy." Nick motioned his gun forward.
From the darkness, the mechanic emerged. He was naked besides his mechanic's suit in which the arms were still wrapped around his waist and bruises (more then before) traced his body, along with crude cuts that looked like they were made by human hands and small knives. Not by zombies. His lip was busted and his blue eyes had a steely gaze over them. He looked up at her and his lips parted slightly at her sight and he looked away. Nick stood up next to the younger man, and tilted his clefted chin back to face her.
"Ellis....don't betray me again, or next time I'll do it to the other person, okay? You don't want something like that to happen to her pretty body, do you?" Nick ran his hand over Ellis's beautiful face and the young man rubbed his face against the touch.
"Yeah...I'm sorri bout that Nick, nevah gonna happen agen..." Ellis said in a begging and pleading voice, a strange glint appeared in Nick's eyes. He ran a tongue up and down Ellis's cut cheek and the younger of the two moaned loudly. Zoey retreated in confusion, disgust, and slight jealousy.
"You know what you have to do, don't you? It was our deal. She isn't needed...she'll get in our way...you have to do it Ellis..." Nick whispered just above a breath, so Zoey couldn't make it out.
"Uv course...anythin ya want, Nick..." Ellis retreated back into the hall, before emerging with supplies: rope, a knife, and duck tape. Possibly the same knife the made the cuts that littered his body. Ellis dropped the supplies in the corner, except for the rope and approached the threatened Zoey. He forced her down in the chair and tied her to the wobbly chair.
"What the fuck? Ellis, please...why are you..."
"Nick gits what he wants....Ellis has ta listin...always...he loves Nick..." Ellis's eyes were blank, as if he were nothing more then a puppet.
"No...Ellis...please...don't..." She cried, the thick tears trailing down her pale and dirty face. Ellis returned to his nest of instruments, picking up the remaining items. The young woman let out one more shrill cry before having tape cover her mouth. Then she felt it. The cold blade running up her stomach, cutting it lightly.
"Good, that's good...Ellis, I'm proud." Nick chimed in lightly. She simply flailed her head in pain and horror. "Finish it, Ellis...do it...now."
Ellis grinned his adorable grin as he pulled the blade back. Her tears were flowing even faster and heavier then before. She remembered, it was the same grin he gave her as he kissed her and flirted with her. And then the blade lunged downward.
Her screams could be heard through the tape, and the blood flew out as he trailed the blade down her abdomen. Some of the deep red liquid landed on his tone body and filthy pants. Finally, he pulled the blade across her throat, and the screaming stopped.
The young man dropped the knife next to her motionless body. He smiled up at the gambler who smiled back.
"Good boy, she wasn't needed for us to be happy. Now, come with me..." Nick lead Ellis out of the room that was filled with death. He switched the light off and patted the boy's head of brown curls as they trailed out of the building.
"I did good?"
"Great, even better than with the others."
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Comments: 282
NellisRocks In reply to ??? [2013-05-30 23:46:12 +0000 UTC]
OMG dude it's a story it ain't real so STFU. and if you have an problem then GTFO cause no one cares!!!
and make sure you correct your mistakes in your sentences before you type them!
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Kakayu In reply to ??? [2011-04-22 22:59:08 +0000 UTC]
1. Ellis doesn't "love" her, he has a CRUSH.
2. She is not the "love of his life".
And 3....Learn to spell. |:
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Maggot--Medic In reply to ??? [2011-04-10 21:28:55 +0000 UTC]
LOL. Type like a sped and have no fucking reason whatsoever.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to ??? [2011-04-10 19:48:55 +0000 UTC]
'I would have wished something like that upon her', I actually mean I would NOT have wished something like that upon her. I have nothing personal against her.
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A39734 In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-13 22:21:05 +0000 UTC]
thinkingoplotting You sounded very convincing like you did mean it. Now i know you did not mean it. I am ok with you now.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to A39734 [2011-04-13 22:32:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, okay,but it would be nice for you to apologize to the other people you yelled at because...well it was mean to do so. You wouldn't like someone yelling at you, right? It'd be best for you to apologize. Because they really didn't do anything personally to you or harm you.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to ??? [2011-04-10 19:11:48 +0000 UTC]
Whoo, bro calm down. I don't wish that kind of act on anyone. Unless of course they were a really sick person. Zoey is a fictional game character who doesn't really exist and even if she did, I would have wished something like that upon her. And yes, only a sick person WOULD do something like that. I am sick, but I would never do such a thing. It is simply fanfiction and practice for different styles of writing. Since I've written this, I've grown to actually enjoy her is some ways. I even wrote a fanfiction where she...well sort of got with Ellis. And no, sir (I assume you are male) would I enjoy inflicted pain because I am not a masochist. I see why something like this would anger you,but I assure you it is not meant to be taken seriously. If a nicer story where she gets with Ellis would be more to your liking, I'd be more than happy to write you one.
And Ellis nor Zoey are real. They never will be, so the thought of pixeled Ellis 'fucking my ass up' seems highly unlikely.
I appreciate the comment on my writing, even if it is not to your liking, but any comments I will take in as feedback and see how to improve.
Thank you for your time. And I do hope you will take the time to read what I have read, but if not, I will take it in as you were doing nothing more than trying to anger me, but you did not.
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GeneralCopperNickle [2011-03-31 01:06:26 +0000 UTC]
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.
I still don't get why she was nekid. ; A ;
THE UNAWNSERED QUESTIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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thinkingorplotting In reply to GeneralCopperNickle [2011-03-31 01:13:57 +0000 UTC]
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thinkingorplotting In reply to GeneralCopperNickle [2011-04-02 04:50:19 +0000 UTC]
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GeneralCopperNickle In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-02 04:54:54 +0000 UTC]
This just scareded my little mind. ; A ;
It's just...so mentally graphic in my head.
it hurts. /baw baw
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thinkingorplotting In reply to BrotherAntroz [2011-02-04 21:10:04 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea.
I thought the same exact thing when I finished it.
In all honesty I don't hate Zoey THAT much,but she is my least favorite survivor. The Nick/Ellis wasn't actually intentional,but I am a fan of the pairing so it just sorta sneaked its way into the story. And I felt like writing some OOCness and gore. LOL Not to mention it was 2 o'clock in the morning.
But I see what you mean and I take it you're a Zoey fan so....XD well thank you for reading it, at least. Can't satisfy everyone. I hope if nothing else I've delivered you a little "WTF?" moment in your day.
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BrotherAntroz In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-04 21:15:00 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to come across as a little harsh, but the ending really caught me off guard.
Guro is disturbing enough, but talking about someone's death, albeit a video game character, in such an in-depth manner...is something else.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to BrotherAntroz [2011-02-04 21:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh GOD...I don't like guro either. Not my thing. Gore is one thing...but full on sex + blood/wounds = I do not want.
But I know some people do so to each his/her own.
Aw, it's okay. You didn't come off harsh. xD I understand what you meant, character death is a rather shocking thing in fanfictions. More then anything I wanted to experiment more descriptive violent/gore stuff because most of my writing is Silent Hill fanfiction,but I have so many Silent Hill fanfics I'd done, I thought I'd switch it up with Left 4 Dead.
Most of my writing is romance, actually. XD (without gore, lol)
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BrotherAntroz In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-04 23:40:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, with Silent Hill, gore is almost a must!
I was really taken aback by how willingly they killed poor Zoey.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to BrotherAntroz [2011-02-05 19:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, yup.
Well...I was thinking or writing a prequel to this,but I'm not sure. I guess I kinda killed her willingly because I don't really like her all that much,but I have tortured characters I do like. D: One story, I made Ellis lose his arm. I love that little hick,but I felt like writing something rather depressing....XD
But yeah, I'm not a fan of her, so that's why it wasn't hard to kill her off for me.
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BrotherAntroz In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-05 19:33:44 +0000 UTC]
I find it a bit weird how people can say that and then turn around and say Rochelle is a developed character with a good voice actor, but that's just me!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to BrotherAntroz [2011-02-05 20:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Hrm, in my opinion both Rochelle and Zoey are...well I think the creators could've done WAY better with them. I prefer Rochelle a little more because she has a little bit more of a spice to her that, in my opinion, Zoey lacks. The male characters are much more interesting to me, with better development, better looking (then again I'm a girl xD), and better actors and face models then the females have. To me Zoey and Rochelle I equally dislike, because I think they could've made better representatives for females in the games. Or at least improved Zoey and Rochelle.
I tend to dislike female characters all the time, though. To me, the always seem to follow some type of stereotypical personality for female characters or they lack personality at all.
They all have fairly good voice actors, though, but when you compare an actor like Ellis's voice actor to Zoey's...of course she isn't going to look as good of a voice actress because Ellis's actor is very expressive and loud.
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BrotherAntroz In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-02-05 20:36:51 +0000 UTC]
The only part of that I have to disagree with is the last paragraph. Rochelle sounds completely uninterested in anything that happens, even the death of her allies. Her screams are completely over the top and nerve-wracking (not in a good way), and the death screams in particular are probably what drove Valve to removing custom radial menus altogether.
But I can seriously go on all day about her.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to BrotherAntroz [2011-02-05 20:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh...I know. I don't like Rochelle or Zoey's voice. I don't like the female characters at all. xD
I'd much rather play/listen to the male characters.
Zoey is bland to me and Rochelle is bitchy. And I really don't like how either of them look.
That's why I like the males. <3 Ellis is SO cute...and has a good looking face. And I love his accent. Louis is just plain awesome. Francis is an asshole,but in a good sense of the word. Nick is every girl's bad boy dream. Coach is epic, and makes me think of a really awesome father figure. And Bill is just an amazing leader.
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SimplyCrisis [2011-01-02 23:09:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome fic, even though I love Zoey and Zellis. But this is magnificent!
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thinkingorplotting In reply to SimplyCrisis [2011-01-03 03:30:57 +0000 UTC]
*cough hates Zoey and Ellis/Zoey*
Thank you! I'm glad that even a fan of Zoey and Ellis/Zoey can still enjoy this story. xD
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SimplyCrisis In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-03 03:44:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's pretty awesome, like the faint Nellis in it as well. *Is a Nellis fan as well.*
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thinkingorplotting In reply to SimplyCrisis [2011-01-03 03:47:48 +0000 UTC]
<3
Wow...never thought I'd meet someone who was both an Ellis/Zoey fan and a Nellis fan. xD
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SimplyCrisis In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-01-03 03:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, when it comes to my pairing I've got a love for F/M pairings. M/M and F/F pairings. I don't know why some people tend to only like one typing of you know. Maybe I'm just the odd ball.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to SimplyCrisis [2011-01-03 03:53:42 +0000 UTC]
Naw, I'm the same. Although f/f is rare for me...there are some I like.
For example I LOVE Shaun/Desmond from Assassin's Creed,but I also enjoy Desmond/Lucy.
I just don't like Ellis/Zoey because I've always disliked Zoey, even before L4D2 came out. xD
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MsJillyJelly [2010-12-19 23:49:11 +0000 UTC]
OH MY FUCK THAT WAS DISTURBING ;A;
ELLIS WAS LIKE HYPNOTIZED HOLY SHIT NICK
I HATE ZOEY TOO. SHE'S SO ANNOYING
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thinkingorplotting In reply to MsJillyJelly [2010-12-19 23:49:48 +0000 UTC]
XDD
So you liked it? xD
What part was your favorite?
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MsJillyJelly In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-12-19 23:51:58 +0000 UTC]
Yah! I really enjoy gore and stuff like that.
I liked the part how Ellis was smiling as he was hurting her and saying that he loved Nick and always will. It was creepy XD
But why would Ellis make out with Zoey and flirt with her if he was just gonna kill her D:
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thinkingorplotting In reply to MsJillyJelly [2010-12-19 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]
I AM GLAD...IDK...I WANTED THEIR RELATIONSHIP (nick and ellis's) to be REALLY fucked up...to the point were Ellis would do anything for him, regardless of what anyone else thought or would feel.
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MsJillyJelly In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-12-20 00:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Right, almost like Nick is his master. I get that though. I think you captured that really well
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lkuto In reply to thinkingorplotting [2010-12-19 23:50:56 +0000 UTC]
:/ and ur only option is YAOI xD
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