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Nick was beyond surprised at their little companion's skill with firearms. The young boy was terrified just as much as them, if not more so, but his quick and small body allowed him to dodge the stumbling undead's attacks. His aim was amazing, 'must have 20/20 vision' Nick thought. He actually wouldn't be to bad on the team...if he'd shut up. If the boy wasn't screaming or yelling from fear he would just talk....and talk...and talk. Now Nick knew completely why he never wanted kids. They were fucking annoying. And of course his teammates were too busy saving the brat's ass to watch his back.Finally, the elevator. To be honest, Nick wanted to just break down and throw a temper tantrum. It just wasn't fair...why'd this have to happen? And just before he could scream he heard sobbing. The punk had started crying.
"Oh...sweetie...don't worry, it'll be fine...we'll take care of you." Rochelle said lightly as she hugged the youngest of the group.
"GODDAMMIT. You have GOT to be fucking kidding me!" Nick screamed, causing both the young boy and woman to jump. Ellis instantly stop crying and coughed back any tears. "Just how old ARE you? You're too old to blubbering like a baby. Get OVER it you little punk. If you want to live you better shut up and grow up." Nick grabbed him by his left wrist, readying his hand to slap the boy across the face, but stopped dead in his tracks. The way Ellis looked at him...the fear in his eyes...and yet...the familiarity...the child seemed to be used to this kind of treatment. Nick let him go...and the rest of the ride down the elevator was silent.
The smoke just got thicker and thicker. And the boy's coughing got louder and louder. "Jesus Christ, kid." Nick took his jacket off and wrapped it around the boy's face. It smelled like strong, expensive cologne and a tinge of sweat. He picked up the small body and motioned for the others to go on ahead. "You guys clear the area. I'll bring the brat after. His lungs can't take this kind of smoke unprotected."
Coach and Rochelle shared the same skeptical look, and finally Coach uttered what they both were thinking. "Why the sudden change a heart, Nick? You was five minutes away from shooting the boy a second ago."
"No reason...he just might be useful...now GO."
And so they did, following through with Nick's plan. And Nick followed through with his end of the plan, bringing the kid with him. He could hear the coughing through the white fabric.
"Don't worry...we're almost out." Nick assured the child as he saw the outside patio was just in sight.
"Thank ya..." Ellis mumbled through the man's suit jacket. The safe room was just in sight. Nick let the boy down and put his coat back on. Ellis ran towards the other two companions in the safe room. Finally...until Nick was attacked up some hooded freak. Before the long claws could make contact with Nick's chest, a bullet made contact with its head. Ellis had shot him. The undead dead body fell on Nick, who quickly pushed it off.
"I guess we'll call it even, huh?"
"Guess so..." Ellis chuckled. He seemed to be opening up more to the older man...maybe he just might change that cold attitude of his.
And so they ran into the safe room, quickly slamming the metal door behind them, locking it tight, and blocking it off with various objects within the room.
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Comments: 60
Joosh-Face [2011-04-06 21:43:40 +0000 UTC]
Seems good so far, even if Ellis is a sad sack instead of obliviously happy like normal. XD
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Joosh-Face [2011-04-06 21:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Okay...maybe read the artist's comment next time?
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Joosh-Face In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-06 21:56:57 +0000 UTC]
I did. I meant him being a sad sack for this part of it.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Joosh-Face [2011-04-06 21:58:04 +0000 UTC]
And? I know that.
If you've ever read any of my writing you'd know I am more of a depressing drama writer.
Besides, realistically any human would be depressed in that kind of situation, either that or angry and running on nothing but adrenaline.
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Joosh-Face In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-06 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]
I was just saying Ellis is a sad sack for now. o.o;
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anomoo [2011-04-05 23:23:10 +0000 UTC]
MMM, woman you are far to good at writing and i have been following this with GREAT JOY
Keep it up :'D
i have been so dead lately i am so behind.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-06 03:41:14 +0000 UTC]
PFFT, THANK YOU.
I'm sorry, but don't stress yourself, make sure to keep some 'me' time set aside.
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-07 00:37:53 +0000 UTC]
MY PLEASURE ;DD
ITS FINE, I THINK I HAVE TO MUCH ME TIME HOHOHO
also i drew something you'll like hehehe
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-07 00:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Gah, lucky. I am to lazy to do my school work and then I'm like "OMG, OUT OF TIME!" like a dumbass...xD
OH REALLY? What is it? *super excited*
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-07 00:46:56 +0000 UTC]
YEAH
EVERYONE IS LIKE THAT, i feel bad.
freaking
schools
being schooly.
WELLL
ITS NELLIS
thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-07 00:49:49 +0000 UTC]
D'aw, don't worry. I'm like...the second top of my school, so I don't have to worry too much. xD But I feel bad for other people who don't..y'know get the school work. D: FUCK SCHOOL. I'LL BE A TREE AND SIT IN THE SUN.
............I ALREADY LOVE IT BECAUSE YOU FUCKING DRAW NELLIS AMAZINGLY AND IT IS LIKE ONE OF MY TOP FIVE OTPS. I can't wait to see it. <33333
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-07 22:32:58 +0000 UTC]
WHOOOAAA
YOU ARE SMAAART MISSY, i am tres impressed.
DSGXDFBXFD CAN I JOIN YOU?
LOLOLOLOL, ITS A SKETCH, i think i might put it in a monochrome style when inking.
DUNNO YET
it might inspire you x3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-08 01:09:19 +0000 UTC]
FUCK YEAH YOU CAN JOIN ME. (and thank you <3)
AWESOME. Thank you SO much. ;A; <3
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-09 16:11:07 +0000 UTC]
OF COURSE <3 HOORAY!
PFSDGDSBH It's nozzing really x3
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-10 19:13:17 +0000 UTC]
<3
But it is something.
AND DUDE, someone like raged on one of my fics. I kinda lol'd inside. I thought I'd be upset if it ever happened, but I'm not. I'm just like "WHUT?"
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-12 01:55:50 +0000 UTC]
Oh did they?
what didn't they like? ._. was it just the usual "OMG DEY ARN'T GEY AAAAH"
or something else?
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-12 19:50:23 +0000 UTC]
Naw, cause I killed Zoey. xD
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-19 00:50:39 +0000 UTC]
OH
WELL
...TELL THEM TO
DEAL
WITH
IT.
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thinkingorplotting In reply to anomoo [2011-04-19 17:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I basically did and he kind of apologized...tis weird. O.O
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anomoo In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-24 22:06:20 +0000 UTC]
...that is weird, oh well!
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Sefriu [2011-04-01 21:57:39 +0000 UTC]
This is getting really interesting.
On a side note... THE TROLL POPPED UP FROM BEHIND THE RATING BOX!!! O_O;;;
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thinkingorplotting In reply to Sefriu [2011-04-02 00:18:48 +0000 UTC]
WOOT. I'm glad.
AND LOL. XD
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thinkingorplotting In reply to ThisIsMyUnderland [2011-03-30 23:09:51 +0000 UTC]
XD We'll see. LOL But thank you so much, my Seme Nick. <3
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ThisIsMyUnderland In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-30 23:13:37 +0000 UTC]
AWW YOU ARE VERY WELCOME MY UKE ELLIS!!!! <3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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thinkingorplotting In reply to ThisIsMyUnderland [2011-03-30 23:25:00 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT.
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ThisIsMyUnderland In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-30 23:30:43 +0000 UTC]
<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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ThisIsMyUnderland In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-04-02 11:53:43 +0000 UTC]
<33333333333
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thinkingorplotting In reply to XxXBuri-ChanXxX [2011-03-30 22:58:43 +0000 UTC]
WOOT. <3 Thank you.
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XxXBuri-ChanXxX In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-30 22:59:28 +0000 UTC]
<33333 no problem!~ 8D
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thinkingorplotting In reply to vampiremonkeygirl [2011-03-30 21:42:49 +0000 UTC]
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vyvyan1rick [2011-03-30 21:30:00 +0000 UTC]
I actually really like the fact that each update is short-ish, it's nice and manageable. I like that about your writing.
A suggestion I may have is instead of putting anyone's thoughts inside apostrophes, perhaps write the thoughts in italics. I think you have done that with other things you've written, and it is just an idea, apostrophes work too
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thinkingorplotting In reply to vyvyan1rick [2011-03-30 21:35:16 +0000 UTC]
How can you like it being short, though? D: Thank you, though.
I have no idea how to do italics on this site. xD
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vyvyan1rick In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-30 22:16:43 +0000 UTC]
lmao, I'm not too sure about italics either xD I think you put < i > before what you want to be in italics and < /i> that at the end where you want the italics to stop. Only with out the spaces inside the weird pointy bracket symbols
I like the fact that it's short because it means I can just read through it really quickly, like I said, it's nice and manageable. If only the updates were more frequent haha
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thinkingorplotting In reply to vyvyan1rick [2011-03-30 22:26:25 +0000 UTC]
Like this?
Yeah...school is my main issue and my slight writer's block. I can't wait until summer. I'll be updating rapid fire.
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vyvyan1rick In reply to thinkingorplotting [2011-03-30 22:54:32 +0000 UTC]
so the italics does work then lmao XD
I know what you mean about school though, I had the same problem at school and again now at college. I don't get most of my writing done till gone midnight :/
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