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this-epiphany — April, 2004 by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-07-15 08:11:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1057; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 7
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Description I was fifteen. eight hours
in the waiting room remembering
the ride, lights flashing, you
crying through your oxygen
mask, saying I'm okay,
I'm okay. I still hear you
when I close my eyes,

see the man across the room,
folding paper cranes out of
magazine pages &
pamphlets about every
kind of pain. after six hours
he taught me the right way
to fold a wing

& it was, I think, the one thing
that saved me: each
smooth and steady crease
a promise.

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Comments: 14

smilewithlove [2012-10-16 06:02:39 +0000 UTC]

outstanding, heart-touching piece

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FuzzyHoser [2012-09-29 15:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Little distractions sure do amount to so very much, eh?

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this-epiphany In reply to FuzzyHoser [2012-09-30 05:07:48 +0000 UTC]

oh, they get us through so often.

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-09-28 10:11:06 +0000 UTC]

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this-epiphany In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-09-29 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much especially for this piece.

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archelyxs [2012-07-17 05:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Such a beautiful sincere heartbreaking moment. You have given us a gift in sharing this

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this-epiphany In reply to archelyxs [2012-07-18 23:32:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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ohsostarryeyed [2012-07-16 15:53:31 +0000 UTC]

sometimes, when you can't stop yourself from reliving something or obsessing over something, writing it out is the only way it stops. i wonder if it's because then, it knows it's been recognised. thoughts and people are alike- neither wants to be ignored.

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this-epiphany In reply to ohsostarryeyed [2012-07-18 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I sometimes think it's like that. because someone out there somewhere, someday, might read it and be like - I totally understand. and that helps quiet the restlessness and the obsessing.

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ohsostarryeyed In reply to this-epiphany [2012-07-25 02:41:28 +0000 UTC]

i think that's writing's purpose in general, even!

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JadeHades [2012-07-15 19:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written. I love the detail about the paper cranes and the gentleman patiently folding them... Not only soothing but the deeper meaning behind them, a wish for peace and if enough are folded the possibility of recovery from illness and pain.

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this-epiphany In reply to JadeHades [2012-07-15 20:22:18 +0000 UTC]

yes, like the thousand paper cranes from Hiroshima. I was thinking about that the whole time I was folding. Thank you for reading

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Wise-lies [2012-07-15 14:31:05 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful, very well written.

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this-epiphany In reply to Wise-lies [2012-07-15 20:21:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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