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Published: 2012-07-15 08:11:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1057; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 7
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I was fifteen. eight hoursin the waiting room remembering
the ride, lights flashing, you
crying through your oxygen
mask, saying I'm okay,
I'm okay. I still hear you
when I close my eyes,
see the man across the room,
folding paper cranes out of
magazine pages &
pamphlets about every
kind of pain. after six hours
he taught me the right way
to fold a wing
& it was, I think, the one thing
that saved me: each
smooth and steady crease
a promise.
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Comments: 14
FuzzyHoser [2012-09-29 15:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Little distractions sure do amount to so very much, eh?
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this-epiphany In reply to FuzzyHoser [2012-09-30 05:07:48 +0000 UTC]
oh, they get us through so often.
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DailyLitDeviations [2012-09-28 10:11:06 +0000 UTC]
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this-epiphany In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-09-29 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much especially for this piece.
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archelyxs [2012-07-17 05:08:55 +0000 UTC]
Such a beautiful sincere heartbreaking moment. You have given us a gift in sharing this
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this-epiphany In reply to archelyxs [2012-07-18 23:32:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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ohsostarryeyed [2012-07-16 15:53:31 +0000 UTC]
sometimes, when you can't stop yourself from reliving something or obsessing over something, writing it out is the only way it stops. i wonder if it's because then, it knows it's been recognised. thoughts and people are alike- neither wants to be ignored.
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this-epiphany In reply to ohsostarryeyed [2012-07-18 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah, I sometimes think it's like that. because someone out there somewhere, someday, might read it and be like - I totally understand. and that helps quiet the restlessness and the obsessing.
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ohsostarryeyed In reply to this-epiphany [2012-07-25 02:41:28 +0000 UTC]
i think that's writing's purpose in general, even!
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JadeHades [2012-07-15 19:39:56 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully written. I love the detail about the paper cranes and the gentleman patiently folding them... Not only soothing but the deeper meaning behind them, a wish for peace and if enough are folded the possibility of recovery from illness and pain.
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this-epiphany In reply to JadeHades [2012-07-15 20:22:18 +0000 UTC]
yes, like the thousand paper cranes from Hiroshima. I was thinking about that the whole time I was folding. Thank you for reading
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