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Published: 2012-05-28 22:29:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 21836; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 95
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To not make Dash feel lonely, Twilight arrives to the cast. Also, changelings. But the title should make that obvious.I made a reference to my favourite game series, can you catch it?
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why is this one in pencil and the first was not?
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The first was remade at later date, there's still link to the original.
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The changelings! They're back!!! And they stole Twilight's wings!!! (Just kidding ^^ This a a before "Princess Twilight Sparkle" comic right?)
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Yes, I started this back in 2012 when no one expected the princess thing coming.
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I see! I'm guessing you know about Tirek and Twilight's new home and occupation?
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Sure I do.
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I figured
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Twi! wheredya get that plaster on your leg?
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sheΒ telleported it from her library to there
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Hate to sound nitpicky, but...
It kinda looks like Twilight splattered that Changeling while it was either already dead, or begging for its life.
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Yeah, well, I drew this a year ago; I was just getting the hang of drawing ponies.
I'd redraw these first pages in SAI if it wouldn't delay new pages further...
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Like I said, I was just nitpicking. XD
I only really noticed it on a second viewing anyway. It's not a big problem or anything; just...bugged me a little.
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There's lots of stuff on these early pages that bug me too.
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Whoa I love were this is going! 
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My stories demand action!
Oh, the things that I have in store for this story... I'm really excited of the twists I've planned!
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hahah im very happy for you!
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I've gotten nine watchers so far with only these three pages, and this is gonna be a long comic, so I wonder how big it'll get...
But yea I have the same issue with this as with all my other fanfics; namely that I'm not sure what happens in the middle. I have always the start and ending planned carefully, but everything in between I more or less make up as it goes. 
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DAng that is gonna be alot of watchers by the end of the comic!
Thats pretty mush what happens to me but I mostly just think up alot of random scenes that I like and then i dont know how to link them together to make the story! 
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We'll see, we'll see - but that'd be awesome!
Lololo yeah I have these scenes too that I'll fit along the story, it's actually kinda like a ladder; those scenes are the steps and then I make up something to hold them together.
But usually the point, the reason why I really write (or draw in this case) a story is the ending. This one is going to be a two-parter so the 'ending' is actually a middle point in this comic, but nonetheless I'm itching to draw it already! 
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haha that is the exact same thing that happened to me!
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Ugh, just talk about it... I have five fics posted at ff.net and only one (the first) is finished. One I cancelled and rest are on hold indefinitely due to lack of time/interest.
This comic is easier case as I don't need computer in making it.
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Really?> Ive only seen 1 of your stories (TDW) and this comic right here
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Yeah, I have three HTTYD fics and one WALL-E fic besides TDW. My first fic, for HTTYD, is the only one I've finished. The sequel for it I cancelled. They both are horrible horrible, I don't advice reading them.
Third HTTYD fic I was rewriting but now it's on hold.
WALL-E/crossover fix is on hold too.
They're all found at my ffnet acc, but like I said, don't read the Deathwhisper Island. It's my first fic and very much horrible.
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ahah its ok!
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I found that most of my fics are simply too ambitious, too long. I could be able to finish them still, that is, if I'd get some feedback. But alas, TDW got barely any reviews at ffnet and only some more here, which really don't help my motivation... KFP seems so dead fandom now when compared to MLP.
I've decided that if I write new fics, they will be one-shots so nothing is left hanging.
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that is the same thing that happens to me! Everytime i start one i always promise myself that its only going to be about 10 to 15 chapters but psshhhh rite now im on chapter 26 or 27 in BSD and NOWHERE NEAR the end..infact, not even the middle just to tell you how long it is 
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Huh, it's that long?
Kinda the same thing with TDW... there's still those scenes I want to write, but IDK if I can handle the stuff in between. Actually, there's only one chapter before I could write Cike's first mission. But I don't really have time for writing anyways until my work ends at the end of July.
Yeh, there comes hardly any watch messages these days from the Shen groups, and most artists have moved on.
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Eeyup! 
so ar you still planning on continuing Cike's mission plan or have you just gav up on the fanfic?
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I haven't given up yet, but it's pretty safe to say that if I can't make myself to write more within a few months, then it's practically dead.
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yea same here
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These are awesome! We need more hand drawn comics. I'm totally following this, I want to know how it ends. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you!
I'll do my best.^^
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