Ravenheart707 [2009-02-17 03:48:57 +0000 UTC]

'lease just don't play with me
My paper heart will bleed
This wait for destiny won't do
Be with me, please, I beseech you
Simple things, that make you run away
Catch you if I can

Tears fall, down your face
The taste, is something new
Something that I know
Moving on is easiest when I'm around you

So bottle up old love, and throw it out to sea
Watch it away as you cry
Now a year has passed
The seasons go

Waiting, day to day it goes through
My lips are sealed for her
My tongue is tied to a dream of being with you
To settle for less is not what I prefer


Summertime, the nights are so long
The leaves fall down, and so do I into the arms of a friend
Winter nights
My bedside is cold, for I am gone
And spring blossoms you to me

Please just don't play with me
My paper heart will bleed
This wait for destiny won't do
Be with me, please, I beseech you
Simple things, that make you run away
Catch you if I can'

Paper heart by all american rejects, awesome live.

I like you poem and the subject matter, i might try it and see what comes out. Well done!

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ElfLady64 [2009-02-17 01:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that was really sweet!
I love your use of metaphors!
<3

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