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Published: 2015-09-10 19:20:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 789; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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If I died, would you wish I'd stay?
It could happen now, maybe today.
What if I was gone tomorrow?
Would you cry and feel the sorrow?
Would you miss me when I'm gone?
Would you think of me all day long?
If I died, would it be bad?
Or would you just pretend to be sad?
Would you bother to remember that time
When I was still here, happy and fine?
Would you miss me like I'd miss you?
Would you even care? If only I knew.
If tomorrow is the day I die,
Would you care? Would you cry?
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I wrote another poem!
Don't worry, I'm okay.
Blooooood
By the way... a question for you: Would YOU cry?
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Comments: 128
SquishyKin12 In reply to Tienala [2015-11-22 16:44:07 +0000 UTC]
No problem! It really is amazing! N do u think of those poems ur self?
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KosmoKOYOTE [2015-10-18 04:32:37 +0000 UTC]
This poem has touched my heart. I would take the body of this little fox onto
my arms and yes. I would cry.
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redghost187 [2015-09-23 12:40:20 +0000 UTC]
I think I would do more then just cry XD the last death in the family I had I just stop feeling everything and told everyone I was ok but I would just go in my room and quietly cry. So I think I would do the same for you.
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AinoBunnyApplejack [2015-09-19 19:10:57 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww..... this looks so sad...
Very expressive draw and poem of sadness! But is awesome how you express it!
Of course I'll sad and I'll miss you!
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Tienala In reply to AinoBunnyApplejack [2015-09-19 20:56:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, my friend!
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FigoFox [2015-09-17 18:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Aww, so sad! Beautiful poem, and yes, of course I would cry
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Danno1991 [2015-09-13 17:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that's a sad but powerful poem. I love it. ^^
I love the drawing too. ^^
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solangedrawing [2015-09-13 12:27:19 +0000 UTC]
If you died i couldn't believe this tragedy
If someone has to die,i'd rather it'd be me
What could i do if If you'd disappear ?
I'd be dying, drowning in my tears
There wouldn't be any day without thinking of you
Without writing you messages,like i was used to
If you died i'd become mad
Because you know,i'd feel so bad
I wouldn't dare to happy
'cause you see,you're dear to me
And you?Would you be okay in heaven?
Because you had a life and only one
If tomorrow is the day you die
Yes,i'd care,yes i'd cry.
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Oh i know that was shit haha sorry for that horrible english that is burning everyone's eyes...but i really wanted to respond to this poem ,it's so sad... Of course i would care it'd be so damn horrible to bear..(lol a rhyme xD)
but even if the drawing and the poem are sad it's still really beautiful ,great work
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Tienala In reply to solangedrawing [2015-09-13 18:39:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh MY GOSSSHHH that poem is so wonderful!!
Aww thank you soooo much!!!
OMG i appreciate is so much!
I love your poem!
aww thank you so much! you are such an epic friend!
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13cupcakes [2015-09-12 14:05:03 +0000 UTC]
sad but awesome!!
lool XD we all love blood sometimes XD
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Tienala In reply to 13cupcakes [2015-09-13 18:35:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
haha yeah, i draw some many happy pictures, I need a bit of gore from time to time
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13cupcakes In reply to Tienala [2015-09-13 20:00:34 +0000 UTC]
np!! :3
lol its the opposite here!! i rarely draw something "happy" cuz im rarely happy! lol!
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Tienala In reply to Shadow-D-Husky [2015-09-13 18:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, buddy, I'm fine
thanks for your concern ^^
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Shadow-D-Husky In reply to Tienala [2015-09-15 01:41:52 +0000 UTC]
You're welcole, Tienala.
Hey, I may be a little inactive for a while. Things have been getting busy at work and they dumped a butt load of homework on us (I spent 20 hours studying this weekend, would have studied more but was sick). On top of that I have been really sick lately. Um really nor enjoying this.
I just didn't want you to think I was neglecting you or anything.
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Tienala In reply to Shadow-D-Husky [2015-09-15 17:28:22 +0000 UTC]
don't worry about it, Shadow. <3
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Demonwolf-Nightcore [2015-09-11 18:14:43 +0000 UTC]
Great and sad poem ;w;
Good job!! ^^
Would be sad...but dunno about crying,cuz i hardly know you
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Tienala In reply to Demonwolf-Nightcore [2015-09-13 18:34:41 +0000 UTC]
aww thanks
ooh yeah i understand that xD
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Chief9 [2015-09-11 05:29:07 +0000 UTC]
méghogy sírok-e? Tevagy a legeslegjobb barátom, a legvidámabb, a legszeretre méltóbb a legkedvesebb, a legköltőiesebb
Nem akarok itt Kaltag-oskodni, de need for you^^
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Tienala In reply to Chief9 [2015-09-13 18:34:29 +0000 UTC]
Awwww
én is sírnék ha te meghalnál... Nem akarom téged soha elveszíteni
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Piepaws [2015-09-11 05:17:30 +0000 UTC]
The fur is PERFECT in this! Also awesome perspective and shading! This is just awesome!
You know, if you're heading for realism, might want to go lineless. It's not really hard, and it looks awesome
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Tienala In reply to Piepaws [2015-09-13 18:29:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you so much!
yeah, i will try but lineless is quite hard for me.
my drawing program is not the best
but at least it has this great brush that i use for drawing fur
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