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Published: 2005-04-05 20:39:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I cry a little inside.
I die a little inside.
I am lost inside.
I am alone inside.

Inside I cry.

Inside is all to me.
Inside you find nothing --------(                     )-------  Inside.

Inside Sorrow will wait for tomorrow.
Inside Hate will wait for that date.
Inside pain will never wane.

Inside I stay.
Inside I cry.
Inside I die.
Inside I stay.
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Comments: 9

jinglebells [2005-04-05 20:56:55 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.

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Time-Lapse In reply to jinglebells [2005-04-05 21:01:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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fatal-tragedy [2005-04-05 20:54:35 +0000 UTC]

wow...
i'm so glad my work inpsired you. it feels really nice to be the one inspiring someone. And I like your poem too.
(that was REALLY quick by the way)

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fatal-tragedy [2005-04-05 20:54:06 +0000 UTC]

wow...
i'm so glad my work inpsired you. it feels really nice to be the one inspiring someone. And I like your poem too.

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Time-Lapse In reply to fatal-tragedy [2005-04-05 20:58:44 +0000 UTC]

I know it was quick but you photo put the words in my head all i had to do was wright them. thanks.

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fatal-tragedy In reply to Time-Lapse [2005-04-05 21:13:17 +0000 UTC]

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MysterySphynx [2005-04-05 20:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Looks alright poetry wise, the -----------( )------------- piece was interesting. But are you ok? You seem a bit depressed

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Time-Lapse In reply to MysterySphynx [2005-04-05 21:00:39 +0000 UTC]

I tend to come off depressed all then time when I wright but dpresson is the easyest emotion for me to remeber and form into words. I bnot depressed all the time and now im in a good mood.

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MysterySphynx In reply to Time-Lapse [2005-04-05 22:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Alright then you are forgiven

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