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Published: 2017-02-06 23:31:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1025; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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My hands know the feelof cardboard very well.
They have grasped the corners
of TVs and refrigerators,
cabinets and bookshelves.
They have torn out the guts
of any house I called home.
As unfeminine as I claim to be,
they will never be the dainty,
delicate things that ladies have
So I hold out my hands
like traitors.
They packed every box,
they filled every truck,
they emptied every haven
I ever dared to call my own.
They have robbed me of house
and home for nearly twenty years,
cruel, calloused hands of mine.
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Comments: 14
LirelTamora [2018-04-29 11:03:01 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaahhh i like this one. Oooooh if u added another verse it could be,
Cruel, cold callous hands of mine
But oh how they hold a pen so fine,
Perhaps the inkstains will make it be known, that only these hands can make my home. XD I couldn't help it, it rhymed.
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tinkertype In reply to LirelTamora [2018-05-01 02:37:47 +0000 UTC]
You should write poetry C:Β
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LirelTamora In reply to tinkertype [2018-05-01 03:28:40 +0000 UTC]
I wrote some in highschool, my favorite one is when i plan someones muder and get away with it. Freaked out the teacher but got full marks XD
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tinkertype In reply to LirelTamora [2018-05-02 00:31:44 +0000 UTC]
Β I love that story. Someday you'll have to show me the poem. OuOΒ Β
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PolarAnemone [2017-08-03 18:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Very profound. Made me realise how I still can't come to terms with changes - especially the inevitable ones.
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Eremitik [2017-04-02 11:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Books are treasures to be honored. When I last moved, I packed all my books in boxes and kept them safe. Five months ago, I unpacked them from storage and honored them once again by displaying them on book shelves. It had been nearly ten years. For that, I am deeply sorry. When IΒ took each one out of its box, it was like I finding parts of myself I hadn't realized I had lost.
I have also come to realize that the saying "home is where the heart is", for me, is being comfortable with myself- I am my hearts own home.
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tinkertype In reply to Eremitik [2017-04-03 21:18:46 +0000 UTC]
TEN YEARS. Goodness that must have felt so good, though, to revisit with each one, even for a moment. I had to give so many away, just to keep the ones I have now... one day, though. One day I'll be stable enough that I'll be able to buy back all my old friends. X3
Yes, that. That EXACTLY. Couldn't have put it better myself.
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Eremitik In reply to tinkertype [2017-04-07 00:55:34 +0000 UTC]
It was so awesome, lol. I did get rid of a few boxes. Well, not yet. I cant quite do it.
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tinkertype In reply to Eremitik [2017-04-07 16:12:29 +0000 UTC]
Maybe give them away? I donated boxes to goodwill, that sort of thing, but I also kept some of my favorites and made my loved ones take them. It felt better that way.
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Eremitik In reply to tinkertype [2017-04-08 10:12:10 +0000 UTC]
I have offered some to loved ones but no takers yet.
I have considered Goodwill and a local, used book store so I can at least get something for them. But for now, Limbo works.
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TheTiniestGiant [2017-02-07 03:59:52 +0000 UTC]
Those hands of yours. Those words of yours. Take care of them. Such a heavy things they carry
(p.s. your mom )
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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-02-07 17:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Carrying less and less lately. This last move, I had nine boxes total - books, clothes, computer. Only the essentials. Β
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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-02-07 19:28:14 +0000 UTC]
the minimalist. someday you can collect junk and comfort. You will find a permanent homestead, I am sure
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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-02-07 20:09:24 +0000 UTC]
Someday. But for now, the road~
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