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tinkertype — The Riptide
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Published: 2017-01-02 23:53:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 861; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Description Trailing a line of stones in the sand,
making sure I still know the path
because if I don’t know where I came from,
how can I know where I’m going?
But I’ve lost the stones before,
many times I’ve lost that North Star

in the dark and cold while the wind is blowing,
which way am I supposed to be sailing?
There’s nothing around me but ocean.
So I pick a star, any star
(because any star will do)
and it becomes mine, my North Star,  

until I lose my way again,
lose sight of the vaulted ceiling,
forget the color and bent of the sky
until I grab another, latch onto a lifeline,
clutch it close to myself, ask,
Are you it? Are you my North Star?

And it must be—
I have nothing else.
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Comments: 21

GladeFaun [2017-05-24 20:56:34 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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tinkertype In reply to GladeFaun [2017-05-24 23:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks! C: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading. 

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TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-28 21:38:56 +0000 UTC]

YOU. Your words are always so beautiful, but not just there to be pretty. You spin a lovely world with such sweet sentiment 

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 01:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I try not to indulge in froufrou, except where frills are concerned. Thank you, sincerely, your comments are lovelier.

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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-31 02:21:51 +0000 UTC]

If you're to wear frills you must do so boldly ;D

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 18:09:52 +0000 UTC]

 Or just completely out of fucks to give. XD 

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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-31 18:15:47 +0000 UTC]

I save my fucks diligently. Take them all to the bank. I'm a fuck scrooge 

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 18:30:28 +0000 UTC]

 omg that was brilliant. 

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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-31 18:51:52 +0000 UTC]

You have to budget your fucks otherwise you end up fucking broke

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 19:02:09 +0000 UTC]

OMG DON'T MAKE ME LAUGH RIGHT NOW.    
(but ilu so much right now totally taking a screenshot)

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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-31 21:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes I give my spare fucks to bums

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 21:17:27 +0000 UTC]

That one makes sense and even makes me smile if we consider "fucks" to be a word for care and consideration, but if we take it literally...   

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TheTiniestGiant In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-31 21:22:50 +0000 UTC]

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tinkertype In reply to TheTiniestGiant [2017-01-31 21:28:14 +0000 UTC]

 

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ProfessorMoriarty86 [2017-01-09 03:53:26 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much. One million llamas to you!!!!

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tinkertype In reply to ProfessorMoriarty86 [2017-01-09 05:20:16 +0000 UTC]

But where will I put them all?! D:

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ProfessorMoriarty86 In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-09 20:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, you need a llama bookcase. . .Or a lion's mane

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tinkertype In reply to ProfessorMoriarty86 [2017-01-09 21:23:14 +0000 UTC]

     

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ProfessorMoriarty86 In reply to tinkertype [2017-01-09 21:39:47 +0000 UTC]

exactly!!

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Nomad-Flow [2017-01-04 02:17:17 +0000 UTC]

utterly beautiful, I love it. 
it's a great metaphore

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tinkertype In reply to Nomad-Flow [2017-01-04 02:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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