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Published: 2003-11-14 18:37:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 223; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 38
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2nd in series thanks to 9mm stock for the photoRelated content
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That's pretty cool! The only suggestion that I have is that the skin areas around tube that is going through the mouth could use a little bit more texture, and maybe a little bit of shadow on the inside of the mouth par of the tube. Good work though!
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thanks, yeah - i few people said that to me already, i suppose thats what helps you improve thogh isnt it - thanks very much for the comment
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No prob, Yea I don't critique very often, but If I see something really cool with lots of potential, I just have to point out its downfall because I want to see it perfect.
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thats cool i appreciate the feedback and stuff
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Nice. I can tell where the editing was, but that's only becuae I mess with computers to much. It's very well transitioned and composed. I like it. Keep up the good work.
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