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tmpst24myst — Assimilated
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Published: 2003-10-08 18:22:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 266
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Description
Actual poem is titled AssimilationYes, I am aware that this is an inverted color of the DA forum. That's the point. Or a small part of it, rather.
I'm in no way claiming it as my own. Only the words I added to it are my own. I liked how the inverted colors looked one day while I was bored. We all know it's DA. But the words are mine.
Note: This work is not to be used without explicit permissions from myself, the author. Final decisions made by myself are final.
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Comments: 34
I like it. It sounds "official" but yet still poetic. It reminds me of a poem and the errors I get while running one way or another through computer code. A new fav indeed!
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Thank you very much 
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I do truly like it. I have not had the time to read all of your writings but plan to look through all of the art for the people that I watch in a week or so when I get my own place and set up my net.
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Thanks for checking out my 'art' LOL if you can call it that. I'm more thankful that you read it though. That was the purpose of it.
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this is sad... i don't get it sometimes either. this whole thing just made me sad (or could be that i'm simply still sad about the things that are happinging with a couple of people around here, and i'm transferring it to your poem/art/idon'thavetherightwordsforanyth ingtoday)
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your hugs make me smile, thank you
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I hope you're feeling better *.^
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thank you
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i think that's a great idea, using the box like that.
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why thankyou. this is half of the original idea. i'm still contemplating submitting the entire thing. i just don't want to get banned :/
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what was the entire thing? and why would you be banned?
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the original, original idea would have gotten me banned for sure. the second original idea would just piss some people off LOL
truth hurts sometimes.
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pissing off people for art's sake = cool.
especially if you piss of people you do boring stuff and think they're good artists.
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the boarder on the right is quite the little thinker, isn't it? i like that.
it's interesting that i just read your journal, and then proceeded to read this. consider my brain nicely fucked. this'll keep me in a good mood for a long time.
thanks. this made my night. or is it morning? aw, fuck it. all i know is i've got class in six hours, and i don't feel like sleeping. being too aware of my surroundings makes it hard to ignor the prick bastards that i'm surrounded by.
thanks. this made my week.
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I do believe your comment made my week as well.
Thank you.
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what can i
say?
i was
moved.
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yes, and of course, as I forgot to mention, the rightly border spells it all out.
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so you liked the rightly border? ...
you're good. observant.
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shit doesn't happen, it floats away in sewers.
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WHAT HAPPENED TO EVERYONE?
fuck, I was wondering that same thing months ago, and still ponder it from time to time.
this is sexy and sad at the same time. Am I the only one who sees the relevance of this? as in the question itself?
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And again, you're the only person to get that too.
Is it too much to say I love you for reading between vivible lines?
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the border on the right is interesting.
technology sucks, no?
it's all errors.
computers seem to me,
to be the only object made
that even if left unused,
will eventually break.
wear and tear of digits.
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The border is almost the most important part in this. Almost.
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I think this is what happens when you try to get the Microsoft Windows Error System to write a poem.
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The screen was made for something else but seemed fitting to have as a screen for my poem which is included in the description.
For some reason, it would load there, so I uploaded here. IndyART was the only fitting section b/c there is a poam, just not there.
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yes the words are yours and the iniciative is yours also.
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