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Description He teleports inside, right where Zelda is standing. He wraps his arm around her neck, and summons a dagger. He holds it up to her neck.

"Follow me or my hand might slip"

I grudgingly follow. Zelda remains calm and composed, she doesn't struggle or even try to pry his hands away. She just follows, which I must do for her sake.

We finally turn into the room. I hear him lock the door behind us. We walk to the middle and a diamond wall appears behind us encasing us in a circle. Also in the interior of the circle is a cage, just tall enough for a human.

"Get in" he says nodding to the cage.

I obey, and when I do he throws Zelda to the floor, and snaps appearing in the already tight cage. He pushes my head back into a neck brace I didn't notice till now. He tightly fastens a strap on my chin and one on my forehead. With my head immobilized he pours a potion done my throat. I try to throw it up but he covers my mouth preventing me from bulging. Satisfied with me he teleports back out to where Zelda is lying on the ground.

He then ties her to the ground so she is also immobilized. That's when I realize it: I can't blink. Whatever he's going to do to her I'm going to be forced to watch. He summons a sword a cuts her dress away so her whole back is exposed. I cringe at the sight of seeing my best friend so bare and violated. He then summons a dagger and begins drawing on her back. He inserts the dagger deep into her back and slowly begins drawing a large diamond.

When he's done Zelda is in tears and she's screaming her head off, and I am helpless to do anything. What he does next terrifies and frustrates me. He calls a whip to existence, my whip.

Crack

The whip hits her on her already mangled back, and I can hear the whip tear the gashes open more.

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Oh it hurts. Is this what Link must go through for me? Oh I feel so bad he has tp put up with this freak!

"Aw!"

The whip hits when I was not expecting and I can't bite my tongue quick enough to stop from yelling out.

"Aww does it hurt little princess? Oh you poor thing"

I don't respond, but he does by once again whipping my back, and I once again moan out.

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"Ghirahim! Stop please!Hurt me! But please leave Zelda!"

He stops momentarily, and walks toward my cage.

"Was that a demand or a ply skychild?"

"Well uh...um it wa-"

"You were telling me! You should know by now that the only way to get something is to beg. So are you going to beg or let your girlfriend suffer?"

I didn't bring up the fact that she wasn't my girlfriend, it would just make him rage more. If that was possible....

"Please leave Zelda alone"

"I don't like your tone. What do you want me to do with you?"

I sigh, not believing what I'm about to say.

"Please leave leave Zelda alone and please torture me"

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"link no!!"

"Shut up you worthless piece of trash goddess!"

He gently kicks her head, momentarily knocking her out. At least it will give her some relief.

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"You know what Link I won't leave her alone, no not until she learns her lesson. And then, ohoho then it will be YOUR turn"

He's grinning, he's loving this. Loving me begging, and loving seeing my ''girlfriend'' in pain.

"But since I am such a caring master I will give you some relief just as I gave your friend."

What wait? What is he talking about?

He walks to the back of the cage and I can't see what he's doing. I try to move my head forward but the head restraint does not allow it. I feel a prick in the back of my neck.

"Wh- what did you do?"

My voice is nervous and shaky. He reaches through the bars and gently and lovingly rubs my face, just like a mother does before the break the bad news. Before they go for the kill. I hear Zelda wake and struggle.

"Uh I already told you I gave you som-"

~~~
When I wake up the role's have changed. I am on the floor in the torture position and Zelda is in the watching position.

"Your turn Link!" Joy....

He winks at me and brings out the whip.

"Oh but first I must brand you as mine."

He gives me that smirk that I've known to hate.
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Comments: 70

toadmiffle In reply to ??? [2013-02-04 23:50:26 +0000 UTC]

With ya

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LegendOfZeldaFan101 [2012-10-02 01:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Good goddesses! OH NO!!!

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toadmiffle In reply to LegendOfZeldaFan101 [2012-10-02 20:10:53 +0000 UTC]


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lonemachine [2012-08-13 02:20:37 +0000 UTC]

You still writing?

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toadmiffle In reply to lonemachine [2012-08-13 12:56:01 +0000 UTC]

yah, just havin pc problems

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lonemachine In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-13 20:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Hope they get fixe soon.

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toadmiffle In reply to lonemachine [2012-08-13 22:49:55 +0000 UTC]

yah me too

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lonemachine In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-13 23:24:01 +0000 UTC]

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KumaKashi02 [2012-08-08 16:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Whoa. O.o Was not expecting that at ALL. That was scarily great!

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toadmiffle In reply to KumaKashi02 [2012-08-08 16:38:20 +0000 UTC]

What part? lol Thanks

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KumaKashi02 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 19:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Like, all parts. ^^ You're welcome

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toadmiffle In reply to KumaKashi02 [2012-08-08 20:16:16 +0000 UTC]

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jaeldesi [2012-08-07 17:21:52 +0000 UTC]

i like the change

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 17:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks me too

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:01:55 +0000 UTC]

when i first read it i found the thing with zelda`s breasts a little creepy and to scary for ghirahim but it was still good

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 19:09:06 +0000 UTC]

yah, it was my first time writing something like that and I wasn't happy so yah. I put up a new chapter of change in fate if ya wanna read it

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:13:05 +0000 UTC]

nice i looking into it now ^^

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 19:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:18:37 +0000 UTC]

it was really a strange chapter. little link afraid of drowning instead of a sword??!

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 19:23:32 +0000 UTC]

IDK a sword is scary, but to me (might be different for you) I'd be more scared of drowning, it's slow and it's so hard to know that there is relief just above uou but you cant get to it

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:25:23 +0000 UTC]

yea youre right about that it`s just all scary like burning alive and slowly

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 19:27:58 +0000 UTC]

yea

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:35:50 +0000 UTC]

to be completely honest i think that every torture device or method are terrifying :S

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 19:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm with ya

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 19:56:01 +0000 UTC]

yay not the only one i have such low pain line :3

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-07 20:28:55 +0000 UTC]

yea

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 09:41:41 +0000 UTC]

sorry i meant low pain tolerance but yeah :S

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-08 11:52:54 +0000 UTC]

np yah

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 16:58:28 +0000 UTC]

what would be the torture method you`d be probebly be most scared off? mine is something with needles, suffocation and drowning

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-08 17:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Hmm most scared of probably drowning and needles or something like that. And just getting beat up and punched

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 17:19:17 +0000 UTC]

yeah... do you know people like these kind of things? to get beatings, put under water or getting needles inside them?

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-08 17:20:14 +0000 UTC]

link...no just kidding lol

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 17:21:55 +0000 UTC]

i don`t think he does voluntarily

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-08 18:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Well we can try to change his mind lol

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-08 19:46:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah we can try but i still don`t think he`l like it

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-08 20:15:40 +0000 UTC]

well let's get on it lol

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-09 08:41:37 +0000 UTC]

but where to start? hmm... maybe with whips?

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-09 13:32:49 +0000 UTC]

yes!!

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-09 16:57:54 +0000 UTC]

that`s perfect >:3 let`s think off an suitible chapter with it.

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-09 22:49:46 +0000 UTC]

......at a blank

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-10 08:38:08 +0000 UTC]

me too

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-10 11:10:17 +0000 UTC]

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jaeldesi In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-12 15:57:54 +0000 UTC]

:S we will find something for it

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toadmiffle In reply to jaeldesi [2012-08-12 17:15:43 +0000 UTC]

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Her-Grace-Hylia [2012-08-07 15:53:57 +0000 UTC]

I like it!!

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toadmiffle In reply to Her-Grace-Hylia [2012-08-07 15:56:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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AskCrownClown [2012-08-07 08:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh god... I thought this was GhiraLink Oh god, My eyes... I've... I've just died a little

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toadmiffle In reply to AskCrownClown [2012-08-07 13:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Changed it. Please reread and recomment

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AskCrownClown In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-07 14:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Okay it's better Lol.

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toadmiffle In reply to AskCrownClown [2012-08-07 14:54:31 +0000 UTC]

yah

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