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Published: 2012-06-06 00:59:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1132; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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Description Without further ado I hop out the window, the only problem is I didn't look before I jumped, and now it's too late. Because the ground isn't a few feet away, it's thousands of feet away. In other words I just jumped off a cliff and to my doom. My hands raise up to above my head and I scream. This is the end of the chosen hero. At least I think it is. At the last possible second before I'm too far away from the house to be saved I roughly get seized by both of my wrists.

Nervously, I look up.

"Why I adda!!!!" Ghirahim is not impressed with my latest escape plan, not impressed one bit. With minimal groaning he pulls me up, and throws me on to the floor. I let out a small moan in between my panting.

"What the hell where you thinking?! You have been treated like a king and you try to escape?! And almost die in the process!! Do you know how that makes me feel FURIOUS-OUTR"

"Yah I know!!!!!!!"

He stops yelling. I lay down from exhaustion. I had been getting minimal sleep lately. Also it's like 2 in the morning right now.

"Minions!!!"

I think about 5 Bokoblins come running.

"Minions please take the sky child to his room and tightly secure him."

"Yeas aster"

There talking is so annoying. By the time they pick me up and start off I'm unconscious.

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I suppose I will let Link rest for a bit before I begin his punishment. Now what should the punishment be?
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Comments: 43

starkidfan36 [2012-08-21 18:19:01 +0000 UTC]

i cant find chapter 20

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toadmiffle In reply to starkidfan36 [2012-08-21 20:23:26 +0000 UTC]

[link] I messed up the numbers so this is 20 gonna go fix that, sorry

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starkidfan36 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-08-22 20:09:25 +0000 UTC]

ok thanks

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toadmiffle In reply to starkidfan36 [2012-08-22 21:01:58 +0000 UTC]

np

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CPWCC [2012-06-25 07:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, how about...

Branding him, Whipping him again, (CUZ I LOVE DAH WHIP!) Cage of Fire, (A cage held to the ceiling and being slowly lowered to a pit of fire but enough to cause pain, not to actually kill/burn to death) Being locked in a room that is frightfully cold, (basically, nearly freeze to death), being held down while a nice yellow chu chu electrocutes him, being chained to the wall for three days with a bug cup of water just out of his reach.

I hope that helped.

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toadmiffle In reply to CPWCC [2012-06-25 21:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, I'll start writing

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CPWCC In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-26 05:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Anything to help!

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pikalink21 [2012-06-21 01:03:34 +0000 UTC]

omg i hope u do chapter 20 i love this story its soo goood

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toadmiffle In reply to pikalink21 [2012-06-21 20:10:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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pikalink21 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-21 20:11:04 +0000 UTC]

np add me a friend plz i love ur storys

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toadmiffle In reply to pikalink21 [2012-06-21 20:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I did

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pikalink21 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-21 20:42:02 +0000 UTC]

sweet hey do plan on doing chapter 20 in down fall cuz its a really good story i love it

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toadmiffle In reply to pikalink21 [2012-06-21 22:41:22 +0000 UTC]

yup

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pikalink21 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-22 21:04:27 +0000 UTC]

yaaaay let me know when its posted

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toadmiffle In reply to pikalink21 [2012-06-23 11:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Oke I will try to remember

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pikalink21 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-25 00:01:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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toadmiffle In reply to pikalink21 [2012-06-25 00:21:15 +0000 UTC]

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Illien-chan [2012-06-18 19:50:55 +0000 UTC]

It think he shouldn't try to keep him in a golden cage, but should try to bound him with his word and a vow.
A smal hint for what I have in minde: In most of the western civilizations the persons who give the vow wear golden rings on their ringfingers.^.~

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toadmiffle In reply to Illien-chan [2012-06-21 20:10:37 +0000 UTC]

maybe

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Illien-chan In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-21 21:07:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem if you don't.^.~

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toadmiffle In reply to Illien-chan [2012-06-21 22:40:30 +0000 UTC]

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xBooxBooxBear [2012-06-07 00:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Rape! :3

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killclancamp [2012-06-06 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]

ghira rapes him cuz he tried to run

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LilFunky-monkey In reply to killclancamp [2012-06-06 05:45:37 +0000 UTC]

I like his idea.. you should go with his idea ^~^

Your idea is really good!

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killclancamp In reply to LilFunky-monkey [2012-06-06 05:50:46 +0000 UTC]

lol, thanks (and i'm a girl XD)

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LilFunky-monkey In reply to killclancamp [2012-06-06 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh, i'm so sorry!

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killclancamp In reply to LilFunky-monkey [2012-06-06 06:05:45 +0000 UTC]

it's ok

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-06 01:16:14 +0000 UTC]

new ideas mmmm




what if his punishment would now have the pleasure while moored but air ¬ ¬ w well, that's my idea, I hope I've helped

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-06 01:35:51 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-06 01:45:02 +0000 UTC]

cool store

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-06 02:03:11 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-06 02:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Not problem ^^

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-06 21:52:17 +0000 UTC]

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-06 23:56:53 +0000 UTC]

hello ^^ nia ¬3¬¬w¬

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-07 00:48:10 +0000 UTC]

?

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-07 00:54:21 +0000 UTC]

OUO ^^ niaaaaaa in cat XDDD

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-07 00:59:30 +0000 UTC]

ok

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-07 01:04:17 +0000 UTC]

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-07 01:06:06 +0000 UTC]

;0

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-07 01:12:47 +0000 UTC]

awww sorry I'm bad talking

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toadmiffle In reply to EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-07 01:17:42 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy In reply to toadmiffle [2012-06-07 02:00:31 +0000 UTC]

yeah -.-UU

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EliShadyEliamuyGripy [2012-06-06 01:13:42 +0000 UTC]

ohh poo link

and Hirahim is fabuloss

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