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Published: 2012-03-28 21:23:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1810; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 2
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Uh. I was so tired and it would be so easy to let the darkness come back and take over, but I had been sleeping for so long. Wait, where am I? I open my eyes slowly and take in my surroundings. I'm leaning up against a cold stone wall. I am in a large rectangular room, that looks like a dungeon of some sort. There are cells lining the walls, and I am in one of them. Uh great! Where on earth am I?I try to get on my feet when I realize that my feet and hands are tightly bound by thick rope. How did I even get here? And when was the last time I had eaten something? I try to recall how I got myself into this fine mess but to no avail. I struggle against the ropes to see if they have any lead way, which of course they don't. When suddenly I see a million tiny diamond shards, and I know that can only mean one thing. In a minute my worst fear is realized as Ghirahim the so pronounced Demon Lord appears before my very eyes.
"Hello sky child......"
"G....Ghirahim! I thought you were dead!?"
"Yes well I guess you are easily fooled,"
"But how did I get here and where is here?!"
"Well let's just say that we were fighting and you well you failed, and it hit you quite hard shall we say. And ''here'' is well not important at the moment. What is important is that you are now mine. I'll explain more later, but right now I have important matters to tend so.."
"What other matters?!"
"Oh just the revival of a certain master of mine. Of course I must sacrifice that girl's soul. Zelda is it?"
"No!!" I shouted. It was my destiny to protect Zelda not let her be devoured by a Demon Lord. Again I began to struggle against the ropes that bond me, but they still held tight.
"See you later sky child"
I wiggle my hands in an attempt to get free. I also still have no idea where I am. It's not very hot or dry so I'm probably somewhere in the Faron province. "Wait if I'm Ghirahim's prisoner what is he going to do with me?!" I try to erase the thought from my mind and I get distracted when the door to the dungeon shrieks open and in walk two Bokoblins. One is carrying a sword while the other is also carrying a sword but his looks different. "Please don't come in here" I mumble under my breath, but of course they do. The one starts fumbiling aroung with the keys looking for the right one, while the other one stands guard. After about five minutes they finally find the correct key. They slowly open the door to my cell and then slame it shut behind them. I again try to break free from the ropes when I feel something warm trickle down my wrists. I soon realize that it's blood. My blood. The two Bokoblins are still just staring at me, watching me struggle. They like it. They then slowly roll me over so I'm lying on my stomach. The one with the weird looking sword raises it and I hear a loud click. The other one places his right foot on my back. Suddenly I realize what the one Bokoblin is holding. I had fought these things before. He was Technoblin. They fight using lost technology, to be specific electric powered swords. "No" I yell as I begin to struggle. Out of the corner of my eye I can see the Technoblin raise his sword push a button and then strikes me with it. I feel a zolt as electricity gushes through me. I can feel myself losing conciousness. After the Technoblin is pleased that I'm weak enough he yells at the other telling him to cut the ropes off me. The last thing I can feel is getting picked up before I finally lose concinous.
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Comments: 27
yoshie1234 [2013-07-09 00:46:37 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good. Reread value apparent from the start.
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CPWCC [2012-06-25 06:25:34 +0000 UTC]
*Gasp!* I LOVE THIS!!!! I must go to chapter two now. *SMILZ HAPPILY!*
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ChaosDimentio101 [2012-05-14 01:49:24 +0000 UTC]
D,: OH THE CLIFFHANGERS!
write some more!! this is awesome!
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toadmiffle In reply to ChaosDimentio101 [2012-05-14 14:12:18 +0000 UTC]
Here is the 2 chapter [link]
So far there are 14 chapters. More soon
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toadmiffle In reply to ChaosDimentio101 [2012-05-15 00:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome. Give me your thoughts
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toadmiffle In reply to ChaosDimentio101 [2012-05-15 01:36:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and happy reading
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iloverainbowninjas [2012-03-29 01:10:24 +0000 UTC]
very good so far, quick question; is it going to be a yaoi between Ghira and Link ? if it is then consider Ghira almost toying with Link, plus add some drama to they way Ghira took link and what exactly he "plans to do". hope this helps... please continue
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toadmiffle In reply to iloverainbowninjas [2012-03-29 01:15:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure what it will be like between link and ghirahim. Ghirahim will be toying with link and probably torture. Thanks for your input! I will continue
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iloverainbowninjas In reply to toadmiffle [2012-03-29 02:27:36 +0000 UTC]
thats good and im glad that the relationship between Ghirahim and Link will be somewhat "complicated".
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Raven-igma [2012-03-28 22:51:19 +0000 UTC]
Not bad so far, especially for your first story
One thing I would suggest though is dividing up the paragraphs a little more so that it's easier to read, but yee...
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toadmiffle In reply to Raven-igma [2012-03-28 22:55:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes I do need to work on my paragraphs
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toadmiffle In reply to xBooxBooxBear [2012-03-28 22:36:41 +0000 UTC]
More will be coming out very soon! If you have any ideas please say them
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xBooxBooxBear In reply to toadmiffle [2012-03-29 18:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Yay!
Will do! (first gotta think of some xD)
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