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Published: 2012-04-01 19:48:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 906; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description "Link. Link"

Huh? I look up to see Zelda standing before me. But I thought? It must have just been a bad nightmare.   Ghirahim. Demise. Nothing was real.

"Link I just wanted to tell you that I've had a change of heart"

What the goddess was she talking about?!

"After some tough thinking I thought it would be more beneficial if I joined Ghirahim's team if you will."

What the heck was she talking about?! She was going insane! She was the goddess she couldn't help the enemy!

"Of course we will have to....eliminate you first"

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I slowly come back to the real world. Those drugs must be messing with my mind. I take in my surroundings. I'm in the same room as before and I'm still tied to the table. My mouth is still forced open and the poison continues to drip in. Great.  I also realize that I'm drenched in a cold sweat. Those darn drugs! How much longer would I be stuck here?!

I had a horrible headache, blurred vision, finding it extremely difficult to stay conscious and all of my muscles ached. Wait! There was Zelda!

"Zelda come help me!"

She didn't move and then she was gone. WAIT! What was that sound?! Those drugs are making me lose my mind.

The door shrieked open and in walked the demon. Well that's who I think it is.

"I see you're awake sky child. You must be feeling awfully weak right now. That poison. Don't worry it won't kill you. It'll just give you: headaches,hallucinations, blurred vision, weak, hard to stay awake, and severe muscle aches. ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME!?!?"

I felt his hand make contact with my check as he smacked me.

"Maybe they gave you too much. Uh give me a minute...."

Ghirahim began unlocking my tongue and face. Then he removed the straps that where on my thighs and abdomen. Finally he unlocked my wrists and ankles. I was free except that I was to weak to to move a muscle. I could tell I was getting picked up when I once again fainted.

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Slowly I woke up.

"Calm down Link. I'm helping you."

I look around. It appears that I'm in Ghirahim's  bedroom.

"Now Link open wide"

"WHAT? So you can poison me more!"

"Why must you be so arrogant?! It's the antidote to the poison. I want to heal you a bit so that you and I can have a fight together. Now open wide!"

I decided to just not open my mouth and I shut it tightly.

"Oh please!"

He just reaches up and pinches my nose shut. The urge to breath becomes to big and I reluctantly open my mouth. He slowly pours the foul tasting liquid into my mouth. Now rest Sky child. With that he grab's the hilt of his sword and bonks it against my head and I am instantly out.

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When I wake up I can immediately tell that I feel better. The door opens and in walks Ghirahim carrying a plate of food and a cup of water.

"Here. Some food and a cup of plain water. Our fight begins in 30 minutes. I will send my servants down to fetch when it is time."

"Will I get my sword!?"

"Hmm, I suppose you can"

"Are you going to *gulp* kill me?!"

"Highly unlikely. I guess it ultimately depends on your behaviour."

"When you send your um slaves to fetch me are they going to um tie me up or hurt me?"

"If you promise to behave, I will tell them to let you walk freely"

"I promise."

"Great. See you later"

I was left alone to my thoughts. I wasn't sure if I should eat the food or not. I had already gulped the water down, but I was on the edge about the food. I finally decided that I would need my strenght for the fight so I ate the food. All now was to wait.

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Awhile later two Bokoblins came to escort me to where the fight was. Just like Ghirahim said the Bokoblins did not tie me up.

As we were walking down a hallway I saw an open window. I decided that it was now or never.
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Comments: 18

Zelda1987 [2012-04-05 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]

i hope u post chapter 6 soon...i really like this and its as good as septemberraven's fan-fiction!

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toadmiffle In reply to Zelda1987 [2012-04-05 11:15:18 +0000 UTC]

[link]

Here is chapter 6, and thanks

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Zelda1987 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-05 17:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and np! It was good too!

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YoYoYoshigirl [2012-04-03 00:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Your off to a great start but I think your way of writing needs some work. I'm not trying to offend you or anything like that. I just think you need to work on putting more emotion in your writing. You need to describe every detail of what's happening. Like the poison water part. It seemed that link took it as if it was an everyday thing. But don't worry. I'm sure you'll get the hang of it ^_^

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toadmiffle In reply to YoYoYoshigirl [2012-04-03 00:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I do need to work on it but I am only in grade 8 so yah. Thanks again

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YoYoYoshigirl In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-09 04:34:21 +0000 UTC]

...... I'm in grade 8 too.
(troll face)

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Zelink5 [2012-04-02 00:36:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really really good! I liek it!

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toadmiffle In reply to Zelink5 [2012-04-02 00:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. If you have any ideas please say them

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Zelink5 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-02 00:41:56 +0000 UTC]

I have a question. What happened to Zelda after her Demise ate her soul? You could say that Ghirahim threatens to kill Zelda if Link doesn't stay.

Jusst a thought! Hope it helps!

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toadmiffle In reply to Zelink5 [2012-04-02 00:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Mer-Wolf [2012-04-01 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh Ghira, helping Link. I KNEW YOU HAD GOOD IN YA! *anime sparkly eyes*

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-01 21:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Is it ok if I ask you a question about mystory? Like it's about the next chapter

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Mer-Wolf In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-02 00:33:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I didn't answer! I feel so guilty!My parents are keep meh busy!

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-02 00:37:17 +0000 UTC]

That's ok. I was gonna ask you if you had any ideas you wanted to share (random I know)

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Mer-Wolf In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-02 00:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Ghira has a secret lair somwhere or something and whisks Lil Link there instead of anywhere near where even Hylia has been... someplace ensuring no escape.

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-02 00:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Where do you think the lair should be (what province)?

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Mer-Wolf In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-02 01:32:27 +0000 UTC]

*smirks* THAT'S the thing. It wont be where even Zelda can find him. I dunno... the first thing that popped into my mind was deep under the ocean or something... WAY past Lanayru desert.

No provinces...

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-02 01:55:56 +0000 UTC]

I'll see if I can fit it in somewhere. Thanks!

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