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Published: 2012-04-08 13:23:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 871; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description The first thing I notice when I come to is that I feel atrocious.  My head feels like it's going to explode, I want to throw up, and all of my muscles are sore. Carefully, I open my eyes. It looks like I'm in the sealed grounds. I open my eyes a little more. With certainty I can say that I am in the bottom of the pit at the sealed grounds and that I am leaning against the wall. The next thing I notice is that the sealing spike in the middle is gone. Great.

Wait! How did I get here?! One word. One horrible word: Ghirahim! I look around but to my surprise I can't see him, but yet I feel his presence. Then I remember. He forced me to eat supper with him and the food was poisoned. That's why I felt like crap.

I tried to stand up but I was just too weak. I felt myself slipping back to the dark side. It would be so easy to accept but instead I resisted.

"*Evil laugh* Tired sky child?! I thought you and I could go on a field trip and since I knew you would resist I had to trick you shall we say? Are you listening!?!"

When I felt a cold, hard hand make contact with my cheek I forced myself awake.

"That's better.... Now the purpose of our trip."

He walks to the middle of the pit (where the sealing spike should be) and snaps his finger. In a flash of white, what looks like a body appears. Ghirahim walks back to me.

"Since I am such a caring helping master let me assist you."

He grabs my arm and pulls me to the centre. On the way I mutter "If you were such a caring master you wouldn't drug me"

"What was that?!"

"I said that  if you were such a caring master you wouldn't drug me or hurt me or anything! You would respect me!"

He drops my arm and I fall so I'm laying flat on my back. He raises his foot and brings it down hard on my ribs. I can hear them crack under the pressure. I let out a small grunt as the air rushes out of me.

"Maybe that will teach you to respect your elders"

"Oh so you're admitting you're older?!"

He bends down so close to me that I can feel his warm breath on my chilled face.

"Do not test my patience!"

With that he grabs the same arm and resumes dragging me to the centre. After what feels like hours he finally let's me go.

"This is what happens to those who oppose me"

I slowly turn my glance to the pile in the middle. What I see horrifies me. It's Zelda. Her body is lifeless and still. She's gone. I feel tears start to form in my eyes. I gently grab her arms and place them over her chest. I then fix her hair. At this point in time I wish I could die. At least then I could be with her.

"You! How could you?!" I yell in between my sobs.

I focus my anger on getting up. After minimal problems I'm up on my feet. With the rest of the energy I can muster, I wind my arm up and punch Ghirahim straight in the face. I let out a small laugh before I fall back to my knees.

I look back up at him. His face is a complete mess. There's extremely large amounts of blood dripping down is face. His once white outfit is stating to turn crimson as the life giving liquid drips from his chin.

"You......"

He snaps his fingers. When I look back at him all of the blood is gone and he is completely healed. Before I know it he grabs my arm and once again snaps his fingers. When I re open my eyes we are not in the woods anymore. We are in a damp, dark dungeon.

"Get ready to see what hell is like Link."
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Comments: 23

killclancamp [2012-04-08 20:58:23 +0000 UTC]

nice

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toadmiffle In reply to killclancamp [2012-04-08 21:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Bjartskular9 [2012-04-08 20:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Poor Link. XD Ghira's so EVILLLLLLL. And sexy. :icopnpervyghirahimplz:

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toadmiffle In reply to Bjartskular9 [2012-04-08 20:55:11 +0000 UTC]

True

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Bjartskular9 In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 23:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh crap. Screwed that up. XD

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toadmiffle In reply to Bjartskular9 [2012-04-09 00:21:49 +0000 UTC]

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Mer-Wolf [2012-04-08 15:29:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm now one happy fangirly! This is great!

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-08 15:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanx

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Mer-Wolf In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 15:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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toadmiffle In reply to Mer-Wolf [2012-04-08 15:54:06 +0000 UTC]

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Zelink5 [2012-04-08 14:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is awesome! Great Work! CAn't wait!

Hang in there Linkie! you can escape!

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toadmiffle In reply to Zelink5 [2012-04-08 14:32:53 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Torqual3D [2012-04-08 14:13:54 +0000 UTC]

You get knocked unconscious a lot in these stories. It seems like a theme

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darkershadow348 In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 16:02:31 +0000 UTC]

I've noticed that too! I bet there is a lot of brain damage as a result. :S

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toadmiffle In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 14:15:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL yah I guess he does

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Torqual3D In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 14:15:49 +0000 UTC]

You enjoy writing those scenes?

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toadmiffle In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 14:19:18 +0000 UTC]

I've never thought of it that way but yeah I guess so. Any special reason why you asked?

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Torqual3D In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 14:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Just wondered why you were drawn to my page. I think I know why

I like your writing. Would you ever consider writing similar stories for my characters?

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toadmiffle In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 14:42:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL Mm yah if you want me to I will

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Torqual3D In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 18:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Please do! Which ever character you like most...

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toadmiffle In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 18:59:45 +0000 UTC]

I think i'll do Amanda Jones first

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Torqual3D In reply to toadmiffle [2012-04-08 19:12:23 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see that

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toadmiffle In reply to Torqual3D [2012-04-08 19:15:01 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to get it done soon but I have 3 other stories so yah

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