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Toderico — Cyborg Wars: Reboot (Page Two)
Published: 2012-04-26 20:29:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 364; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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5/3/12: Added basic color to bottom half.5/4/12: Finished basic color. Added cobblestone, mostly.
5/9/12: Finished!
Yes yes, I finally finished the second page of the comic. In all truth, it just took me forever to finish the second half of it.... which.... doesn't make taking so long.... sound ... any better....
But yay it's finished! I hate that you can tell the two halves were drawn separately. I was unable to change the first halve's sky colour as well.... But oh well!
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Hey, tell me. Is the text a bit too hard to read? I made the text in panel 10 and 11 trail off on purpose, if that wasn't obvious.
I'm hoping to make more of the comic soon, so I'd appreciate some criticism here and there.
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Comments: 10
I'll definitely have the next page in time!
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I trust you completely.
Especially with all the end-of-year projects/finals we have in the next two weeks. You know, all that easy stuff.
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I'll just drop out and save the trouble. That way I'll have more time to draw and have no back-up plan, it's fool proof!
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Thickening slower than molasses .
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I picture a red/white beam area effect ala the deviant flag of japan in the anger panel.
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What if I had whatever the colour on the previous panel (the one where he looks only a LITTLE ticked off), and then added a red aura to Lekarski (that's the character's name (or the lower half of the panel, closest to Lekarski). Also something I should note, the last two panels will fade out, as our character faints.
The problem now is what colour the first thin panel should have? Because whatever that is will also be the back colour for the next thin panel, but the second will have the red aura (and maybe darker?).
I also had the idea, with the jabbing panel, where a blood-shot effect around the edges could happen. I could colour this one with the cobblestone, with the blood-shot/red aura thing around the edges.
What do you think about these ideas? (Maybe I can implicate the red beam thing in the aura somehow?)
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good ideas. i like the aura idea
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