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Published: 2004-09-13 16:27:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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I hope you find the way out,Of cage you seem to be in,
Never left alone, but never together,
Climb the walls of the enclosure,
Scream the pain, and let it out,
Far too dead to run,
Never dumb enough,
To make yourself believe it,
Your way too emotional,
Your stupid traits and lies are indignant,
You’ll never find your way, out of the enclosure.
So pushed (never alone)
So pulled, (always broken)
So angry, (the time is gone)
So devastated,
So weighed (always heavier)
So changed, (never the same)
So dead, (cant lift myself)
So devastated,
Save the bullet for yourself,
Don’t ever let the knife slip,
You’ll find yourself in a place where everybody's crying,
Injustice makes you angry,
Your way too emotional,
Your stupid traits and lies are indignant,
You’ll never find your way, out of the enclosure.
So pushed (never alone)
So pulled, (always broken)
So angry, (the time is gone)
So devastated,
So weighed (always heavier)
So changed, (never the same)
So dead, (cant lift myself)
So devastated,
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Comments: 20
thank you.
iv just notice that you say i love you more than i realised. i gess im just never online to read it.
i loooooooooooooooooooooove you
my aymiekins xxxxxxx
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indeed Im yours... forever mwhahahaha...*ahem*
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forever is the only way to share you and always i will be provd to be with you every second i keep you, you make me feal real.
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i climed away,
to find the light of day,
the love of truth,
and the joy of play,
silence covers up the screems,
and the thaught of death have exusted me.
now all i need is a heart thats warm,
your love and me,
we will make it
becaus i did
for you
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wow thats so pretty but so sad 
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i would bleed to hear those words,
they have a distant ring of heaven,
i would die to be the only one,
and kill to have your heart.
i love you too
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but you dont need to. It's right there...in your hands
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ouch
telling me yor fealings insted of walking out or saying "whatever" and then pretending to get along with ppl healps.
your only in the gage if you belive your in one.
if the bars dont exist you can walk out.
i love you and change kills me.
pleas tell me your heart.
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What the hell do you suppose I do, I've had to spend 6 weeks with Calvin when all I wanted was you... maybe if we'd had a week alone I'd still be able to talk to you, but Ive seen how you two act, Ive seen the part of you I wasn't ment to I want my old Harry back and he's just not there anymore. I don't even glimpse him in your eyes, and Im sorry but it's too late, I can't change my feelings... Im sorry.
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great work i love it! Yot your message across clearly it's rad!
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the repetition is v. effective, an i agree with hayley, nice wordage. we'll have to do it in Azrael
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I love you....make up music for it though, at some point I have the tune in my face (head)
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im not too good at composing, u'll have to help me/us...... the tune's in your face?!
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yay! Ame! this reminds me of all my problems but its a great poem.
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this is excellent.. & yeah, it is kinda joj-ish 
anyway, i love this.
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i love it..love the so devastated..especially since u used that word it makes it sound much more meaningfull and deeper
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