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Published: 2004-10-20 18:14:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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As high as kites before we fall,Recover, mend, bleed,
To take away our soaring,
Over zealous, emotional defect(ion)
We are the only ones left fallen,
Everyone else is above us,
Mentality of minors,
Looking up into the unreligious sky,
As me and my friend,
(Feverish tears make love to our eyes),
Cry out for saviours from our blackened hole,
Deep below the ground where worm create.
The damned sky above us laughs,
As the stupid kites linger there,
Floating ever up words,
Kissing the dark red mouth of lust,
Committing sodomy with hatred,
As their world,
Slowly
Drowns....
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Comments: 19
Metallica-And-Slayer [2005-03-27 22:04:31 +0000 UTC]
your goddamn good at this ame!!! seriously dudess xxxxx
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blueink21 [2004-10-20 18:30:34 +0000 UTC]
really good image you created i love it, weird poetry that you have to think around its great, you can tell i like that kinda poetry as its all i write lol, but i love this well done
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punkloser [2004-10-20 18:20:05 +0000 UTC]
this is so good, i love the way you made words stand out from words with bold. so clever!
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konnolibi [2004-10-20 18:16:17 +0000 UTC]
for some reason that scares me......love the imagery.....
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Torn-Rapture In reply to konnolibi [2004-10-20 18:24:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm so sorry I scared you...thanks for the salute though
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konnolibi In reply to Torn-Rapture [2004-10-20 18:26:11 +0000 UTC]
naw, its nearly halloween, ur allowed to welcomes....
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konnolibi In reply to Torn-Rapture [2004-10-20 18:30:37 +0000 UTC]
lol eeepp!! *hides behind sofa*
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Torn-Rapture In reply to konnolibi [2004-11-01 19:25:22 +0000 UTC]
*eats the fairy* yumm...tastes likes plums....
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