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Published: 2007-11-21 19:59:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1823; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 56
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Description 4th Logotype...for an energydrink brand...

If you have some ideas for improvement then let me know!!

Comments and are very welcome!!

greetings from Germany...Torsten
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Comments: 32

fabiank [2009-01-30 16:12:44 +0000 UTC]

das obere (gelbe) ist richtig geil!

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Torsten85 In reply to fabiank [2009-01-30 16:24:58 +0000 UTC]

schön schön danke!

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spacesuitcatalyst [2008-06-28 01:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Lovin' the play with movement and sort of a wispy, flame-ish effect on the letters.

It feels maybe a little overdone in some places though? The curves on the E, while nice at first, get a little crazy, and the curve effect applied to what I'm guessing is an exclamation point makes it look more like a question mark, to me (Ener-G? Why yes...).

The E also creates a problem for the secondary text ("never get tired again"), as it intrudes too far below the baseline, causing there to be a rather unsettling gaping hole between "never get" and "tired again".

Maybe play down the curves on the E a little? Make it a little more subtle (ever so slightly), especially around the bottom, and straighten out the exclamation point a little, and I think you'd have yourself an excellent logotype indeedy


I'm in a critique-y mood. Sorry if I'm annoying you

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pho3nix-bf [2008-03-08 12:36:44 +0000 UTC]

nice idea - but hard to read no shadows and glossy please !! (u seem to be obssesed with it )

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Torsten85 In reply to pho3nix-bf [2008-03-08 12:45:25 +0000 UTC]

hehe thx a lot for ur support man1!

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DangerousDigital [2007-12-08 20:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Good concept. It flows well.

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Torsten85 In reply to DangerousDigital [2007-12-08 21:33:55 +0000 UTC]

hehe thx a lot!!

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fee3R [2007-12-01 16:16:10 +0000 UTC]

das 2. is richtig nice

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Torsten85 In reply to fee3R [2007-12-01 17:41:59 +0000 UTC]

hehe freut mich !!

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Swayze05 [2007-12-01 10:03:41 +0000 UTC]

pretty cool I like the pattern and colours

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Torsten85 In reply to Swayze05 [2007-12-01 17:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Thx a lot mate!! Glad!!

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Swayze05 In reply to Torsten85 [2007-12-01 18:41:39 +0000 UTC]

np

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basstar [2007-11-27 16:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Sehr nice!

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Torsten85 In reply to basstar [2007-12-01 17:41:21 +0000 UTC]

hey vielen lieben dank!!

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deC9r [2007-11-22 16:27:26 +0000 UTC]

ich finds auch geil 2nd ist geiler

lg

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Torsten85 In reply to deC9r [2007-11-23 10:00:17 +0000 UTC]

dank dir freut mich echt!!

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kwusherARTS [2007-11-22 12:49:33 +0000 UTC]

2nd is better. Nice work. I like colors in 2 version

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Torsten85 In reply to kwusherARTS [2007-11-23 10:00:09 +0000 UTC]

thx a lot mate!! Glad about ur support!!

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latv1a [2007-11-22 12:22:08 +0000 UTC]

iwie siehts für mich etwas zu lang aus, so nicht wirklich zusammenhängend , alles andere ist echt nice

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Torsten85 In reply to latv1a [2007-11-23 09:59:48 +0000 UTC]

hmm...soll ja aufen energy drink...dafuer denk ich ist es net zu lang xD aber vielen dank!!

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BriaNBruer [2007-11-22 05:20:45 +0000 UTC]

nice! ... mehr kann man dazun nicht sagen o0

greetz BriaN

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Torsten85 In reply to BriaNBruer [2007-11-23 09:56:08 +0000 UTC]

hehehehehehehe...danke dir vielmals!!

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djdez92 [2007-11-21 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]

always something great from you! great work again bro

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Torsten85 In reply to djdez92 [2007-11-23 09:55:44 +0000 UTC]

hehe...thx again mate!! >D

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SeyitAbi [2007-11-21 22:34:28 +0000 UTC]

sehr schön

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Torsten85 In reply to SeyitAbi [2007-11-23 09:20:19 +0000 UTC]

dankeschön!!

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termi1992 [2007-11-21 21:05:33 +0000 UTC]

sieht gut aus EnER.g!

würde ich aus dem logo lesen^^

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Torsten85 In reply to termi1992 [2007-11-23 09:20:09 +0000 UTC]

rüschdüsch...gut erkannt

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tecwzrd [2007-11-21 20:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Bottom logo spacing looks further on the E then the top one which looks better IMO.

Both are still too difficult to read but I like the concept.

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Torsten85 In reply to tecwzrd [2007-11-23 09:55:27 +0000 UTC]

Thx a lot for ur support on all my logos!! THX BRO!!

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z3rx [2007-11-21 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]

das untere is bombe, die E's sind hamma!
finds perfekt für nen energy-drink!
diesma bekommste nen fav^^

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Torsten85 In reply to z3rx [2007-11-23 09:19:54 +0000 UTC]

hehe wie lüüb...dank dir!!!

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