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4th Logotype...for an energydrink brand...If you have some ideas for improvement then let me know!!
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greetings from Germany...Torsten
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Comments: 32
spacesuitcatalyst [2008-06-28 01:36:50 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. Lovin' the play with movement and sort of a wispy, flame-ish effect on the letters.
It feels maybe a little overdone in some places though? The curves on the E, while nice at first, get a little crazy, and the curve effect applied to what I'm guessing is an exclamation point makes it look more like a question mark, to me (Ener-G? Why yes...).
The E also creates a problem for the secondary text ("never get tired again"), as it intrudes too far below the baseline, causing there to be a rather unsettling gaping hole between "never get" and "tired again".
Maybe play down the curves on the E a little? Make it a little more subtle (ever so slightly), especially around the bottom, and straighten out the exclamation point a little, and I think you'd have yourself an excellent logotype indeedy
I'm in a critique-y mood. Sorry if I'm annoying you
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pho3nix-bf [2008-03-08 12:36:44 +0000 UTC]
nice idea - but hard to read no shadows and glossy please !! (u seem to be obssesed with it
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Torsten85 In reply to pho3nix-bf [2008-03-08 12:45:25 +0000 UTC]
hehe thx a lot for ur support man1!
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kwusherARTS [2007-11-22 12:49:33 +0000 UTC]
2nd is better. Nice work. I like colors in 2 version
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Torsten85 In reply to kwusherARTS [2007-11-23 10:00:09 +0000 UTC]
thx a lot mate!! Glad about ur support!!
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latv1a [2007-11-22 12:22:08 +0000 UTC]
iwie siehts für mich etwas zu lang aus, so nicht wirklich zusammenhängend , alles andere ist echt nice
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Torsten85 In reply to latv1a [2007-11-23 09:59:48 +0000 UTC]
hmm...soll ja aufen energy drink...dafuer denk ich ist es net zu lang xD aber vielen dank!!
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BriaNBruer [2007-11-22 05:20:45 +0000 UTC]
nice! ... mehr kann man dazun nicht sagen o0
greetz BriaN
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Torsten85 In reply to BriaNBruer [2007-11-23 09:56:08 +0000 UTC]
hehehehehehehe...danke dir vielmals!!
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djdez92 [2007-11-21 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]
always something great from you! great work again bro
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termi1992 [2007-11-21 21:05:33 +0000 UTC]
sieht gut aus EnER.g!
würde ich aus dem logo lesen^^
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tecwzrd [2007-11-21 20:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Bottom logo spacing looks further on the E then the top one which looks better IMO.
Both are still too difficult to read but I like the concept.
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Torsten85 In reply to tecwzrd [2007-11-23 09:55:27 +0000 UTC]
Thx a lot for ur support on all my logos!! THX BRO!!
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z3rx [2007-11-21 20:04:34 +0000 UTC]
das untere is bombe, die E's sind hamma!
finds perfekt für nen energy-drink!
diesma bekommste nen fav^^
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