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Description
This is an edit by ~Katheryn-Liza .

This PMD model actually has a nice color scheme but has a whole series of issues that spoils its overall appeal.

MMD:
[1] On loading the model and turning on physics some physics fall off or out of place and one piece just doesn't move.
[2] The model needs to wear a bra - too much jiggling in the chest area - there's a physics problem here.
[3] Shoulder joint looks awkward - no easy fix for this.
[4] Elbow joint looks awkward when bent; needs re-weighting.
[5] The feet/ankle/shoe/toes have problems. The bone structure is broken down in this area and I'll cover this in more detail below.

Appearance-wise, she's got awfully broad looking shoulders - almost makes her look like a male cross-dressing as a female. In general, the proportions on this model are not elegant.

Motion used here to test the model is FREELY TOMORROW. This is a good motion for testing purposes as it puts the model through a wide range of standard type bone movement without extremes and will make glitches immediately apparent.

PMD:
[1] Bone labeling incomplete.
[2] Facials have no English labels.
[3] Group list need to be redone/cleaned up.
[4] The foot (see insert above): This area is missing the bone structure required to stablize the IK bone structure. It basically needs to be rebuilt. As is it spazzes out and there's nothing controlling where the toes go which is one of the reasons why it's going through the floor.
[5] Mother bone is below the origin point as is the view cnt bone - both need to be at 0x,0y,0z.
[6] Center bone requires an anchor bone for stability reasons.
[7] Same applies to the groove bone.
[8] Breast physics need to be redone - there's two sets of breast physics going on in there and this is what is causing the issues with the hyper-active jiggling. There's too much junk in this general area to see what's really going on - recommend to delete everything in this area and redo from scratch.
[9] Junction between legs and hot pants needs to be closed.
[10] Hair texture is patchy. Can't see it in the screen shot but it is very apparent from the back.

Other issues:
There is one huge texture map in the folder: body00_MikuAp.tga (16MB) - it's not even used on the model and shouldn't be in the distribution package. I think there are a few other unneeded tex maps in the folder also which should also be removed.

Readme.txt (RULES,txt) ~ wholly uninformative. Needs a re-write.

MMD 8.03
PMD 0.1.3.8
Photoshop 7
MME: Serious Shader / Mirror Floor

Review per request modeler/editor.

Description
This is an edit by ~Katheryn-Liza .

This PMD model actually has a nice color scheme but has a whole series of issues that spoils its overall appeal.

MMD:
[1] On loading the model and turning on physics some physics fall off or out of place and one piece just doesn't move.
[2] The model needs to wear a bra - too much jiggling in the chest area - there's a physics problem here.
[3] Shoulder joint looks awkward - no easy fix for this.
[4] Elbow joint looks awkward when bent; needs re-weighting.
[5] The feet/ankle/shoe/toes have problems. The bone structure is broken down in this area and I'll cover this in more detail below.

Appearance-wise, she's got awfully broad looking shoulders - almost makes her look like a male cross-dressing as a female. In general, the proportions on this model are not elegant.

Motion used here to test the model is FREELY TOMORROW. This is a good motion for testing purposes as it puts the model through a wide range of standard type bone movement without extremes and will make glitches immediately apparent.

PMD:
[1] Bone labeling incomplete.
[2] Facials have no English labels.
[3] Group list need to be redone/cleaned up.
[4] The foot (see insert above): This area is missing the bone structure required to stablize the IK bone structure. It basically needs to be rebuilt. As is it spazzes out and there's nothing controlling where the toes go which is one of the reasons why it's going through the floor.
[5] Mother bone is below the origin point as is the view cnt bone - both need to be at 0x,0y,0z.
[6] Center bone requires an anchor bone for stability reasons.
[7] Same applies to the groove bone.
[8] Breast physics need to be redone - there's two sets of breast physics going on in there and this is what is causing the issues with the hyper-active jiggling. There's too much junk in this general area to see what's really going on - recommend to delete everything in this area and redo from scratch.
[9] Junction between legs and hot pants needs to be closed.
[10] Hair texture is patchy. Can't see it in the screen shot but it is very apparent from the back.

Other issues:
There is one huge texture map in the folder: body00_MikuAp.tga (16MB) - it's not even used on the model and shouldn't be in the distribution package. I think there are a few other unneeded tex maps in the folder also which should also be removed.

Readme.txt (RULES,txt) ~ wholly uninformative. Needs a re-write.

MMD 8.03
PMD 0.1.3.8
Photoshop 7
MME: Serious Shader / Mirror Floor

Review per request modeler/editor.