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Published: 2013-02-20 02:51:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2024; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 35
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"Cry for all the good it does you.." The demon Grinned at his next captive. Stuck in the Maelbolg the wriggly food was a blessing. Though he had come to the end of it, His stomach fattened and the bone pile he'd been collecting in the corner had started to go from an entertaining little atmospheric piece, to getting in the way and making "guests" trip. Grabbing his last treat and lifting it to his lips as they struggled, Zyx remembered His father had told him that these were supposed to last him all week, yet he had barely made it past tuesday. "I should savour you.. but.." The demon boy shrugged as he opened wide.--------------
There, Zyx in a far more Rendered form. He only has his wings when he wants them. As you can gather, He is a bit of a jerk. Unashamedly enjoys eating people. (big surprise I give a character that trait..)
Comments and critique most definately encouraged.. this was after all a practise that went all the way.. I'm too cheap to fork out for the upgraded account so i can ask for proper crit. But they are indeed, anticipated, appreciated, loved, adored and most of all, welcome.
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Datbellyyy~
This is so well composed~~ and the shading and stuff are great! And datbellyyyyyyyyyy~~~
Have I mentioned the belly yet? ;3
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Awww you are too nice. But no, please lets talk about the tummy :3
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x3 if you insist~
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Think the Axis-mundi demons are lawful neutral
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That would mean they're "judges". Order is law. You'd no more help a peasant in need if the law forbids it, then you would let a villain break it.
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Chaotic neutral.. durr..
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So as far as critique goes I'll try to keep this condensed. For one thing I really like how you did the end of the tail, I know that's an odd place to start but I like how the Dimensions of it came out and everything, shading on it is quite nice~ as for more Belly of course is looking wonderful with a nice squish into it Shading on that done really nicely and well, Im not an expert on it in any way, I feel like the glow from the fire could have been a bit smoother in terms of intensity and gradient. Continuing up I really feel like the shirt has a nice fabric-y feel especially with those wrinkles so I'd say that's a definite plus, Also believe arms are at their correct lengths as well so anatomy on that end is looking fine~ One concern anatomy wise though may be from lower back to start of legs, Im not entirely sure if the thing above his hand is a roll of fat or his ass blubbin out but either way it may be a bit dis-jointed. As for the face as I said before expression is really on the evil side, and given the scenario I'd say that fits perfectly~ also enjoy the style of hair you did in addition to how you handled his eyes.
As for the Bg it gets the job done quite nicely, It looks to me like its a metallic floor below him with some nice glow, and those Iron rods look nice as well along with those curtains, possible places for improvement may be a bit more texture defining to the walls, give a better sense of what they are, as well as maybe a skull or two in the middle and right of the pile, for me it took a few seconds to identify what it was, though, that's just me.
But really I'd say it turned out lovely overall~ that tail of his looks wonderful tooo~
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